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Love it!

"I'm sorry, I’ve only read the first four chapters so far, but I really enjoyed them! The story is already so engaging, and the blend of humor, mystery, and tension between Seth and Algea keeps it compelling. I find it especially entertaining how Seth gets pulled into this intense world he wasn’t expecting, and I love how Algea is portrayed. The character development, especially Algea’s strong, mysterious presence and Seth’s relatable reactions, adds a lot to the experience. Even with only these early chapters, it’s clear this story has a lot to offer, and I’m excited to keep reading!"

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Great character development!

"Really enjoying this story so far! I’m curious to see how these two continue to further develop together! "

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Entertaining!!!

"When I first read this book I already thought that the blurb is super cool and the book must be as good! But omggg the book is more than that cause its actually funny! I love how awkward Seth is especially with this paranormal world lol imagining Algae hold him bridal style when they were running away while Seth tried not to throw up was one of the funnuest lol everytime I think about it its so silly I want to laugh! The narrative is light and the pace is fast without feeling like the author rushed everything. Simply, it is a good paranormal read especially if you like awkward main character like Seth and great pacing that surely wont make you feel bored! Good job writer!^^"

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Really good plot

"This has all the makings of being an excellent book. It's imaginative, fast paced, and has great descriptions. The dynamic between the MCs is well portrayed and believable. All the characters are well thought out, and each chapter makes you want to learn more about this strange demigoddess and the world she came from. "

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Humor and Egyption gods, what more can you want!

"This story starts with a good Samaritan wanting to help a girl, only to find that this girl is not your typical damsel in distress. Seth is a very well-developed comic relief character that I found very enjoyable. I loved his reactions to the gods and goddesses because it reminded me of MoonKnight vibes from Marvel, which I deeply loved. I liked the fact that Algea is incredibly strong and doesn't necessarily require assistance except for the one time with Seth 💕. Anyway, I'm excited to see where this story leads! "

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The Scarlet demon

"Your book is really good I love Aglea personality and chacter can't wait to read more."

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There’s Magic in the Blood.

"Seth was an ordinary college student who only wanted to graduate, attend med school and perhaps become a doctor some day. He never expected to discover a beautiful but unconscious woman, bleeding in the alley. There is a hint of Egypt in her stylized eyes and suddenly Seth is full of questions. Who is this mysterious woman and what exactly has caused her injuries? He takes her home and decides to stitch her wounds himself. After all, he could use the medical practice. However once she awakens all hell breaks loose. “Untie me!” she demands, and bites his arm as savagely as any jungle cat would. Later, he learns that she is the demigod Algea, and that she is being hunted down by cruel enemies. Only Seth can help her escape her cruel fate, and become her ultimate protector. A powerful beginning to Gin Kira’s unique story that touches on Egyptian Mythology. It’s a shame there are only two chapters available at the time of this review. I for one am hoping a romance will develop between the somewhat timid Seth and the boldly exotic Algea. Time will only tell if this will occur in …The Scarlet Demon’."

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Interesting start

"After 2 chapters, I’m already hooked and excitedly awaiting more chapters. The author starts right in the action and it really pulls you in. The characters seem interesting and unique already. It’s a unique and fun story "

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Can't wait for more!

"This story is super intriguing from the first sentence and unlike anything I've read before. The descriptions, specifically of the FL, are perfectly written! I could see her so clearly in my mind's eye. "

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Engaging read

"The plots and characters are engaging , the pacing is excellent and apart from minor punctuation issues, it’s an excellent read. Seth is an excellent foil for algea. Can’twait to see where the story goes. "

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First few chapters - ongoing stage

"The plot is compelling and the author gives you just enough info to want to go to the next chapter. The hint of comedy is well done. There are some confusing parts where I had to double check which character was speaking. Other than that, I’ve really been enjoying the book so far."

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