Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Hit Love Back!

"School life hasn’t always been easy for Emily, a pretty teen with long, chestnut colored hair. She remembers her life two years ago in New York, when she along with her best friend Daphne, were new students at the school. For the most part they were ignored with the exception of Joshua who harbors a not so secret crush on Emily. While Joshua is pleasant looking, there is nothing in him to spark Emily’s romantic interest. Alan on the other hand is an amazingly, gorgeous creature. He knows it too, as all the girls stare at him with bedroom eyes. What’s worse, Alan’s best friend Noah, has similar, stunning good looks with black hair and blue eyes. Except he is more arrogant than Alan, and won’t even acknowledge Emily’s presence when she accidentally bumps into him in the hallway knocking all of her books onto the floor. I’d continue but unfortunately the story ends here. There are only two chapters available at the time of this review. But what a fun bunch of interesting characters. The whole story line reminds me a little bit of a television show called ‘Degrassi High’. And yes that’s a compliment. Be sure to check out ‘Love Hits Hard’ when you’re in the mood for some high school fun."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Nice first chaoter

"Nice beginning, can’t wait to read how it goes for Emily at school"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation