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The beautiful mess

"I love this"

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Simplicity with a Heartwarming Message

"This was a beautiful story that really captures the main protagonist in a different persepctive that most stories would do. I enjoyed reading through Sia's narrative and understanding the character development in a great pace. Other than a few grammatical errors at certain points, the plot was simple and easy to understand as the author gave each character the spotlight when necessary. Overall, this was a great story I would encourage anyone to read and experience the journey themselves. "

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I can relate

"I have not finished the book yet but I found the plot very interesting because I have a similar personality with the main character this is a very good read and I can find myself reading it everyday just to finish the chapters the author did a great job of writing something so realistic and relatable like this Xoxo 💋"

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When luck does not want to be with you

"The plot is connected with Indian society as it is true if one of the children of the family does not go with the flow, it is considered that child has some problem. Most of the Indian family does not acknowledge what child is actually feeling and gradually the child suffers within. Tghis lead to so many mental problems, some get depressed while others think this is their life, they have to deal with it one way or another Here, in this story Sia is dealing with so much that she hasn't told it specifically, but we readers can understand what she is going through. Although she is just 17 years and should think about future, but some people don't get any direction to what to do. I personally like this story as it is related with Indian family, not wholly but the way writer focused on the humor of the protagonist, her love life and how luck is not with her. The writer has also tried to focus on suspense of the protagonist in a blissful way. overall, the story is amazing"

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Sia and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Life!

" Nothing seems to go right for Sia, an attractive teenager with an India background. First, her mother yells at her for earning nothing but C’s and F’s on her report card. Then at school, Sis’s best friend Avi hits her so hard on the back in a friendly greeting, that Sia’s gum flies out of her mouth and sticks into Mark’s hair. The final icing on the cake is when she accidentally announces on the school’s microphone how much she prefers asexual people to sexual beings. Sia is laughed at so hard, she is forced to leave the school early out of embarrassment. The only thing that brightens Sia’s day with all of her troubles is hot Dinesh otherwise known as Danny and equally gorgeous Shivam who comes all the way from Texas. What girl wouldn’t want to go out with them with their pretty boy good looks? This is a cute story. Sia is certainly relatable with her struggles with her mother and trying to fit in at school. I also like the idea Sia has for a delete button that would erase painful people and memories from your life. (I wish I had that delete button, too.) Here’s hoping Sia’s life gets better and she becomes more forgiving of herself and others as she matures into adulthood."

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