What is your opinion?
Nice story, east to read.
"I enjoyed the part you have uploaded, great start. I didn’t understand your chapter numbering system but that is minor. For the most part I found only a few typos, I suggest listening to an audio of your book and follow along with your eyes, you might pick up some of those hard to find typos. Good luck, Great start."
3 Prologues?
"I have to mention this, but a book will more often that not fail if it has a prologue. And 3? That's almost obsessive. Just make them chapters or put them all into 1 prologue. Sorry, I had to get that out. That aside, I enjoy the idea and it seems to be decently executed so far. I'm looking forward to the rest of the novel! A few errors here and there, but I go to public school, I'm used to that, haha. Sorry. A few edits, maybe some rearrangement, overall pretty good."
Good so far
"This is a good start, the plot grabs you in the first chapter and makes you curious of what's going to happen next. The grammar did bug me at times so I recommend going back and fixing that before continuing forward with the story."
