Inkitt
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Interesting

"The first chapter doesn't reveal much which leaves a lot to be anticipated therefore leaving you curious about comes next, which definitely is a lovely way of setting an opening to the story."

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Interesting and intriguing

"The magic system and the internal energy idea are intriguing. The magical land and multiple world idea is great, opening up a huge amount of possibilities for the continuation of the story. Can’t wait to see where it goes."

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A Little Lost in the Sauce

"I'm not sure I understand what is happening in the story, so I can't say that I do. But others may enjoy this read."

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