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The Last Song of the Sea

"This is a well crafted short story. With the authors description, you're able to picture the events that take place. Even though it's sad, I enjoyed reading it. Great job, author. 💞🩷💞"

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A twisted surreal fairytale

"A young high-ranking sailor washes up on a siren’s island after losing his crew in a shipwreck. Haunted by an attraction he can't fight and the warnings of the ghost of his commanding officer, submitting to her will be his curse, or his salvation"

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The last song of the sea

"A wonderful and vibrant telling of a shipwrecked Lieutenant and a siren! The author paints a beautiful dialogue and compelling plot that grabs your attention from the very first sentence! I truly love the story so far and hope the author adds more chapters soon! I want to see Jason over come his turmoil with the help of the siren! Well done!!"

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Great writing

"This author does a masterful job of crafting a beautiful tale that is often untold. I can't wait to read more, after only a few chapters I am desperate to read more. Wonderful writing, compelling plot."

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A Shipwreck Tale

"We follow the story of our protaganist as he ends up shipwrecked up on an abandoned island, his entire crew dead. Only the island isn't abandoned per se- it is ruled by a strange spirit which promises to help him find redemption- but can he forgive himself and move on from the sins of the past? I would say the strongest part of this story so far is the style and the prose- it flows elegantly without being too overbearing or too complicated, and at the same time isn't absurdly simple either. I don't see any technical issues with the writing either, and the grammar and spelling are mostly good with few mistakes. "

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