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Traveler the Runaway Book 1

"Excellent plot and reading. Keeps you enough suspense so that you feel the need to the end"

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Nice

"The plot is nice but its seems like everything is happening so first. Space is missing. Its like jumping from one moment to another. Above all story is nice. "

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The Traveler-The Runawsy (Book1)

"A fantastic book, very interesting! I enjoyed reading it! ❤️"

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Testbksh

"Nice story"

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Intriguing

"Really good story, I hope jo finds her powers soon. Constructive criticism is work on your word usage and proofreading backwards is the best way to find easily overlooked mistakes. "

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Wonderful

"I was on the edge of my seat at all times thanks "

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great

"interesting storyline. loved the action and the drama, and also loved the supernatural brought into the story."

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Great story. Loved it

"Very interesting story. It keeps you on it. Great job. Can't wait to read more and to see what happens next. I reccomend it. Love the storyline!! It has five stars from me. It triggers you and it makes you imagine the main charaters."

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Traveler, the runaway bk 1

"This could be a fantastic story if, it gets re-written with better translation to English. There were parts that I couldn't even make any sense out of it. I loved the plot. It was different to most books. The action was constant. You hardly had a chance to take a breath. It's just in dire need of help. I have alot of spare time due to an injury I'd be happy to help with this book at no cost to you. I hope you take my offer seriously as I believe once corrections are made it may be a book to publish. Thankyou"

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Traveler the runaway story

"No comment"

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Ewe

"I can’t even keep up with the story because of the grammar errors and you use the wrong tenses. Everything about this just makes me cringe. It’s like nails on a chalkboard."

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