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A good beginning
"These two chapters are a great opening to your book. It has a good flow and pace. I am very intrigued as to what will happen next! I hope you continue to write your story as I would love to follow and read more when you have added more. All the best, Katie xx"
nice story
"actaully it was an awesome story..I liked your writing skill, the way you arranged everything.....no mistake in punctuation. keep writing"
