What is your opinion?
Sweet May Flowers (but in August)
"Alright, that was a nice little read. I liked May (barely), and the edgy phase didn’t really change that. Ashton (or Ass-ton) (or Ash-hole)… well… the nicknames speak for themselves, but I still adore this cute little bipolar jerk, ESPECIALLY when he’s a cute little bipolar jerk 😁! It’s always my favorite part whenever Ashton and May fight; it’s something to make fun of. Admittedly, the unbelievable amount of unlikeable characters really ticked me off. Tons of toxic parents, psychopaths, AND EMMA!!! I’m even deducting a star just for her mere existence! And here I thought McKenzie was the most b#tchy character you’d ever write! Anyway, all good. Happy ending. Nauseating double wedding. And that’s it. Definitely liked it."
Good read
"Weird at the start but continued on and found the story good despite the negative family situations. Keep up the good writing👍🏼 "
Sweet May Flowers
"I absolutely love the title Sweet May Flowers. It creates such a welcoming and evocative image, while also hinting at the depth and growth of the main protagonist. The characters’ traits feel authentic and relatable, making it easy to connect with them."
Review
"I am absolutely hooked up. I am enjoying your work a lot. You have done an amazing job so far. I really love the girl’s profession. What’s better than a flower shop? Loved every minute detail. The characters are well-finished and the dialogues feel real. Keep it up❤️"
Sweet Flowers
"I have mixed feelings about this one. Mary, a sweet and hardworking 17-year-old who works at her grandma's flower shop, is a really endearing character. 🥰 When a young man, Mr. Robinson, orders flowers from her shop and leaves without providing any contact details, Mary takes it upon herself to track him down and deliver the order. That’s when things get intense. Unfortunately, Mr. Robinson is a total jerk - honestly, he’s pretty awful. His attitude is just obnoxious, and his whole company seems to be filled with people who are the same. I really couldn’t stand him at all. 😅 He’s in desperate need of maturing, and I honestly think he needs to grow up yesterday. 🤣 I’m hoping the writer achieve this if he is the ML and develop his character more. 🙏🏼 He has a lot of potential for growth. BTW I feel like he owes Mary an apology about a thousand times over. He needs to grovel and make things right! But that's just me. It’s definitely a must-read if you want to find out what happens. Lets wait and see further down. "
Intrigued
"Opposites attract, or at least that's what people say. I haven't finished reading the story yet, but so far I am hooked. Even though Ashton isn't coming off that lovely right now, that's what captivates me. I don't know how far he's willing to go to accomplish his goals even if its means using brutal force. Someone is going to get hurt. I hope May's grandma gets better, but I foresee a lot of pain ahead in this story. I love flower shops so I hope May doesn't get involved with something that she shouldn't and lose the shop."
Interesting Read
"This book has some great potential. The pace is a little too fast and the characters are a little hard to follow. There are a few grammatical errors but it does not distract too much from the story. I look forward to reading more of the story because the plot is very interesting. "
Amazing Story Concept!
"I am really intrigued by the entire premise of this book and wish I could speak with the author in more detail about it. The main problems I have with this story all have to do with pacing, description and clarity. The plot is fantastic and the characters are all intriguing but I think some of the authors intended tone and depiction is lost in how rushed it was. Author: I can tell you have a deep love for these characters and this story. Please keep writing and do not give up. I think you are trying to rush to tell the story and if you were to take a second and try and read aloud what you have written you can see what I mean about the pace and scene setting. My best advice I can give is to make sure to take the time to evoke 3 out of the 5 senses in your scene setting and to make sure that your scene transitions feel organic. Please do not be discouraged and please do not give up!"
