A Change In The Fate Design by luna archer at Inkitt
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a change in the fate design

Summary

disclaimer:i do not own the percy jackson percy was betrayed.he was betrayed by his parents...girlfriend...camp.and its all because of.....him. Jonathan young, he took everything away in two weeks.. disclaimer:i do not own the percy jackson series and/or the characters thats rick riordan. summery: percy was betrayed.he was betrayed by his parents...girlfriend...camp.and its all because of.....him. Jonathan young, he took everything away in two weeks.the only people i have the olympians (except...poseidon) juniper , Thalia and Nico. he was going to commit suicide ...but a offer have came up.lord chaos and the fates have given him a chance to go back in time as a child of chaos and champion of the fates.but he won't do it unless he becomes chaos daughter not son to represent the new him.he would be called ...ANDROMEDA DAUGHTER OF CHAOS AND CHAMPION OF THE FATES..what changes will be made?who will andromeda end up with?how will this whole thing turn out?i guess you have to just wait and see.WARNING:A LITTLE BIT OF CUSSING.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

betrayel

disclaimer and warning:i do not own percy jackson or the series thats rick riordan. also there are some cussing but is censored.this is one of the stories that came from my wattpad account,artgirl832.

he is such a F######G A## ###E I HOPE DIES AND WITHER IN THE UNDERWORLD,THAT B#####D!UGH!oh sorry,i didn’t see you there. i forgot to introduce myself.i am percy jackson son, of poseidon... or i use to be until he came along.i remember it like it was yesterday.

>flashback<

i was just dropping of annabeth at her cabin when i heard a girly scream and a cry for help.i raced to Thalia tree and saw the Minotaur chasing a boy around my age.not this guy again i muttered. then i yelled saying” oy ground beef what are you doing here?“that got his attention.he ran towards me at lightning speed i dodge it and slashed at the monster,when it was stuck in the tree it disintegrated. then the whole camp came running.then i found out the kids name was Jonathan young.

end of flash back

what i didn’t know is that i should have left the dude to die.on the same day poseidon claimed him personally...PERSONALLY, he also got poseidon to disown me. in 2 weeks the guy was able to turn the entire camp to turn on me and steal the girl i love.all of my friends turned on me even my girlfriend.then i found out that grover was cheating on juniper with another tree nymph.i took pictures as proof to show juniper.she screamed and yell at grover in front of the whole camp.you will not believe what will happen next, grover SLAPPED her.she didn’t come out of her tree for weeks.both of this happen on the same day.both are still fresh in my mind.

flash back

today was the day i was going to propose to annabeth. i walked around camp looking for her.i went to the beach and a spotted her...but i also saw that she was making out with Jonathan .they haven’t spotted me so i sneaked behind a sand dune and listen.i heard her say ″oh Jonathan i love you so much.″this started making my blood boiled. then i heard the arrogant prick voice″i know that babe but,when are you going to prove it by dumping jackson.“” i,m going to dump him today he is not famous anyway.“said annabeth.that when i started tearing up but held it back.i jump from behind the sand dune.yelling really annabeth you been cheating on me with him.sorry percy i,m not in love with you,i,m in love with him she said in sickly sweet voice.then i guess i don’t need this you witch.i throw the engagement ring and ran to the place i last saw grover.that when i heard kissing sounds.i walked silently forward and look behind a tree.there was grover kissing a tree nymph thats not juniper .i hide quickly behind a tree and thought not grover.i grab my phone from my back pocket.use the camera and put it on silent mode.i took three pictures and ran to show juniper.but unfortunately they heard and grover ran after me.i ran to the strawberry field and showed my phone to juniper before grover tackled me.when she saw the pictures she started tearing up...then her sadness turned into anger she yelled at grover saying “GROVER ... ANNABELL. ANNABELL HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME,MY OWN COUSIN!GROVER HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME YOU-“she was cut of when grover slapped her saying “we are through juniper, i found someone else thats i love and its not you.“she started tearing up and ran all the way back to her tree.after a few weeks me and juniper started drifting from camp.i was sick of this and was going home.then i heard a knock on the door that turned out to be juniper.she said “i know you are visiting your mom but can i come i need to get away from this place.i said “wait here let me i.m her to ask”“i i.m my mom first and ask her if i can bring a friend to visit the new baby Isabella. she said “sorry,percy but i don’t want you to visit anymore because of your sent can endanger the new baby.“i started tearing up.when mom saw she tried to explain softly but i slashed at the i.m.i walked out of my cabin where juniper was waiting.i told her “there be a change of plans.mom don’t want us to visit because it will endanger the new baby.i,m running away are you in?“she was hesitant at first but with new confidence she said “yes”. so we walked out of the place we use to call home.

end of flashback

now me and juniper have a brother and sister bond.we promise to protect each other and not betray like what the camp did.the only other people that are our friends are the Gods,Thalia,Nico and Chiron.nothing weird happen beside the monster attack happen until....

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