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My Mom Went Missing at a State Fair.

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Summary

a 17-year-old Teenage Girl searches for her Mom that had mysteriously vanished at a State Fair.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: A Family Outing at the State Fair Turns Tragic.

Hello, I'm Laura Morefield, a 17-year-old teenager, standing at 5'7, with short brown hair and light brown eyes. My family consists of my parents, Carole and Andrew Morefield, and my five siblings. The youngest ones are adorable Ben, a 3-year-old toddler, Ruby, a 5-year-old little girl, Peter, a 7-year-old boy, and Clara, my 9-year-old sister. Our mother, Carole Morefield, a 45-year-old woman of grace, with 5'8 of elegance, donning shoulder-length golden locks and azure blue eyes. My father, Andrew Morefield, aged 47, stands at 5'9, with captivating brown hair and eyes.


One particular day, the sky painted a crisp blue canvas with the sun beaming down. Our family embarked on a journey in our Blue Chrysler Minivan from our hometown of Coulterville. Our destination? The vibrant State Fair that beckoned us with promises of joy and excitement. After about an hour, we finally arrived at the State Fair. My father, Andrew, expertly parked the minivan in a designated spot in the bustling parking lot adjacent to the fairgrounds. With precise skill, he brought the minivan to a halt, and we eagerly exited the vehicle, ready to immerse ourselves in the colorful world of the State Fair.

The state fair was a whirlwind of excitement as we immersed ourselves in games and emerged victorious. I stashed all our hard-earned prizes in the rear of our sleek Chrysler minivan. As Dad escorted Ben and Ruby to the area filled with whimsical kiddie rides, Mom led Peter, Clara, and me to the thrilling world of towering attractions. A plan was made to reunite at the bustling food court for a delightful lunch before our journey home. Watching our mom observe Peter, Clara, and me enjoying the rides was heartwarming. In return, we observed her courage as she embarked on the exhilarating Zero Gravity Ride. Witnessing her patiently waiting in line alongside the other riders, and then seeing her board the ride filled us with pride. Peter, Clara, and I observed our mother; she was both screaming with excitement and beaming with joy. We could tell she was thoroughly enjoying herself. However, the atmosphere shifted when Peter caught sight of his buddy, Tony Wheeler. Informing Clara and me that he would return shortly, Peter ventured over to engage in a conversation with Tony. As the two strolled away, Clara noticed her dear friend Hannah and made her way to join her for a chat. Meanwhile, I found myself fixated on Mom until I glimpsed my close friend Lucy. Eagerly, I approached Lucy, and our conversation ensued for well over two hours. Eventually, I made the decision to head back to the exhilarating Zero Gravity Ride to reunite with Mom, Peter, and Clara. Upon my return to the ride, I spotted Peter and Clara standing, wearing expressions of concern.

Concerned and confused, I inquired about the situation. They divulged that our mom was missing. Instantly, anxiety washed over me. I approached the Zero Gravity Control Operator, questioning if he had spotted a woman resembling our mom alighting from the ride. Unfortunately, he was unable to provide any leads. It dawned on me that Peter, Clara, and I were embroiled in a precarious situation. Lost in the thrill of the fair with our companions, we had neglected our own mother. Frantically, we embarked on a frantic search throughout the state fairgrounds in the hopes of finding Mom. As we asked around if anyone had spotted our mom, we received no helpful responses. Persistently, we pressed on with our search. Suddenly, a witness grasped my arm urgently, mentioning that they had caught sight of our mom. She had been spotted leaving the Zero Gravity ride, appearing somewhat unsteady. The witness detailed seeing a man accompanying her, their interaction suggesting a familiarity between them. He had casually draped his arm around her shoulder before leading her away.

In an instant, I came to the chilling realization that our mother had been abducted, forcefully taken by an unknown assailant.

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