What is your opinion?
Greeting
"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer."
The Voyage Of Mary Kate Donovan
"This is a great story for anyone who loves a sweet romance. However, my favorite part is when all those children escape their captors. Good character development. Looking forward to reading more. 🌹"
I Love It!!
"I love how this story went & the ending was sweet"
Good read
"The book is a good read"
Great story
"What an amazing love story, wish it didn't feel so rushed at the end but a good read any ways. "
The Voyage of Mary-Kate Donnavon
"I love it! "
The voyage of Mary Kate Donavon
"Pretty good story. Writing skills need some improving. There were no bridges between scene changes, so you knew who was talking/thinking. Also, it would have been nice to know how much time was passing at different times during the story. All in all I liked the story! Do not be discouraged by these remarks, just keep on writing! ☺️🤗"
The voyage of mary kate donavon
"It was a easy reading story simple to grasp. It was just OK "
I enjoyed every bit of the story, from start to finish. Thanks for this beautiful piece
"The story is beautiful even the sad beginning made it much more realistic"
Mary-kate
"Not really a bad story but was kind of confusing . Felt like the story was too rushed, plot was actually messy and didn't know who was actually talking in most of the conversation.Everything wasn't clear enough,I think this story should be rewritten"
So so
"A lot of grammatical mistakes. Nice plot but I felt like some small parts were missing(ex the baby girl miscarriage).End was rushed. When Kate told her husband about being pregnant the conversation seemed detached on Connor's side and a little on her side also, in my opinion.It feelt like a new actors saying their parts but almost no feelings were there. It was a good story but it needs to be rewritten a little bit."
Could have been better but still ok
"It started off slow then towards the end it rushed to the end. It’s weird to say but it was not poorly written yet it was? I felt it was hard to read at times there was no clear change of POV at times and it sort of jumped around. I felt like there was this feeling of “it was written long and edited so there were stuff missing”the whole time I read it. But I enjoyed it. Not the worst I’ve read but not the best. Maybe it needs to be revised & rewritten."
Lost and confused
"There is no clear plot. Too many modern conveniences were included into the story. The character development is lacking. She has a miscarriage and gave birth in the same chapter, no time to greave the loss. I would not say this is complete. I see what the author is trying to convey in the storyline, but your readers need more. I understand her to be a child bride, but I didn't understand the flow to her mature behavior. The timeline is inconsistent with the diary entries. There is potential in the storyline, but I suggest the author rework it to develop more consistent character descriptions and behavior development."
