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"I loved the story. I fell in love with both Aiden and Kam. I am praying for Makayla to forgive Kam and a happy ending for all of them. "

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Great story

"This is a really great story! The characters have flaws and make mistakes and that makes them feel real and relatable. I really enjoy Makayla's chapters and how they shine a light on what it means to be autistic. Good writing."

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Believable characters, solid story

"Love these characters! The challenges are real even with a NFL story line. I love the exchange of Sudney & Kam at the birthday party. I could see her w/kam ir Aiden. I'm excited to keep reading to see where they all end up. "

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