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Great imagination

"I love the imagination behind this work. It shows great thought and has a wonderful foundation. It's a cute short story. Myself I would like to see it grow in length, maybe more detail on surroundings and whatnot, but that's me. I hope for more work, as I see this author has an imagination for writing. Keep going from strength to strength."

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