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"Oh what a tangled web we weave........"
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36 chapters read
Cute story
"Enjoyed this story. Loved the character development "
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33 chapters read
Touching
"This was different. The relationship between the two was so sweet. She took her time to understand him and his condition. I loved the story, it was so heart felt"
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35 chapters read
Like Magnets
"Amari and Avery are amazing together, I would love a sequel (book/part 2). I'd like to know if Avery and Amari get married or have children and if he gives up dealing for her. What happened with Jacob and Tia? I hate how Jacob did Amari like that. What happened with Tyrone? Does he find someone? Did he apologize to Avery for not believing her? Having Amari on the Spectrum was priceless. I love that u made the main male character with Autism. Kudos to you "
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36 chapters read
Like Magnets
"Downright one of the best books. I still don't get how CL can be so magical. This book had me blushing and smiling, and even reading it a matter of hours without a break. I didn't even eat but it's worth it for a book like CL's. You're doing a phenomenal job. Keep being phenomenal. 😁😁😁😍😍😍😍"
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35 chapters read
Loved it
"On behalf of everyone that’s read this ….. it needs a book two ! Please xxx"
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35 chapters read
Like Magnets
"Fantastic story! This story is intense and hilarious. Amari and Avery's journey is a little rough, but they keep getting drawn back to each other. Amari is one of the funniest characters I've ever read about. Amazing story author and well written. I would definitely recommend this book. 💞🩷💞"
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36 chapters read
Like magnets
"OMG I love this I hate to say it but I have lived this story and the ending was perfect in the story and my life great author I can't wait to read every story u write "
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36 chapters read
I didnt really like it
"All the positive reviews had me excited to read this book, but I dont see the appeal to the story at all. I have no comments on the grammar, but I didnt like the characters at all. Amari is supposed to be somewhere on the autism spectrum, that doesnt really become clear in the story, just some comments on him being wired differently. He is being a giant d!ck to Avery, and she doesnt even push back and just lets it happen, which also annoyed me. The whole Jacob situation was also hard to follow and the story just randomly ended while nothing was cleared up. Also the spicy scenes ended really sudden, the buildup was ok and then suddenly 'he came' and that was it, spicy scene over. Like did she came too? No aftermath? For me things like that didnt flow naturally. "
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