Primal Dominance by A. L. Crisp at Inkitt
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Primal Dominance

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Summary

Klaus knows what he wants, and Rose will gladly give it to him. Or will he simply take it?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Rose awoke from her sleep to a noise in her room. She looked through the darkness and found Klaus standing by the bay windows, covered by shadows and moonlight. Nothing but a snug pair of jeans leaving little to the imagination covering him. “Have you come to take me?”, she asked. He started toward her, a low growl in his voice. “No, my love”, he said, “I’ve simply come to take what’s mine”. He lifted the sheet from the foot of the bed, gliding his rough hands over her smooth naked body. He grinned a sinister smile, “You’ve been waiting for me, I see”, he said undoing his belt and zipper, “how gracious of you. I won’t keep you waiting any longer then”.



Klaus slowly slid his hands up Roses legs, sending goosebumps creeping up her skin. She shivered under his touch, her nipples hardening. He traced his lips and tongue across her thigh to the sweet spot between her legs. He was pleased to find how wet she had become just from his touch. “you’re so fuck’n wet for me”, he said rubbing her clit with his thumb, “I want you to scream for me”, rubbing her agonizingly slow. Rose arched her back and moaned, “I want you inside me Klaus. I need it. I wanna scream for you”, she said starting to move against his hand. He stopped her with his opposite hand, “no no, love. You don’t get to come yet. You can only come when I give you permission to come”. “Yes master”, she complied. Suddenly he forced her legs open for him, his tongue starting to play with her sweet flower. Rose gripped the sheets and moans loudly, “god I love your tounge. It feels so good in my pussy”. Then he stopped, sitting up and throwing the sheet onto the floor. “Time to return the favor”, he said, taking out his long hardened cock.



Rose knelt on all fours in front of him, “open your mouth”, he commands. She does as she’s told, and takes his member into her mouth. Her lips wrapped around it perfectly. “Suck on it”, he tells her. As she starts he lets his head roll back, groaning as she uses her tounge on him. She tries to go faster on him, but he stops her, pulling her hair into his fist. “Slow down, I wanna enjoy you as long as I want”, and reaches over her and spanks her, leaving a red handprint on her ass. The smack makes her groan, “yes master”, and suck him harder and slower. Rose feels him grow slightly longer, making her gag. “There you go baby”, he groans slowly moving his cock in and out of her lips, “nice and slow for me. God your mouth is so soft”. She takes his balls in one of her hands, fondling them and licks his cock, smiles and giggles at him. He smiles down at her, “such an eager one to please me. Turn around and bend your ass over. You deserve a reward for your perfect

 

performance”. She kisses the head of his member before doing so.



Rose got up and faced the bed, bending over the side as he got behind her. “You’re gonna scream for me. Do not come until I say”, he commands her, “do you understand me?”. “Yes master, I understand”, she said. He kneels down and starts to tease her with his tounge again. Her knees begin to get weak and wobbly. Klaus spanks her again, “don’t stagger, or you won’t get your reward”, and continues to lick her pussy. Rose starts to yell into the sheets, “please, Klaus! I need it now! I won’t last another minute!”, and bites her pillow. He stands, smacking her ass again, “good. I want you frustrated. Makes this even sweeter”, and slowly sides inside her.



Rose gasps at the sudden sensation of his cock entering into her. “Oh my god!”, she screams, “it feels so fucking good. It’s so fucking hard! Fuck me hard please!”. As soon as the words left her mouth Klaus starts to pound into her pussy. With every drill of his cock, Rose yells louder. “You’re my only master! The only one who can take me! Fuck me so hard!”. He pulls her hair and arches her back, “tell me you love it when I fuck you”, he commands her. Through her screams of pleasure she yells, “I love it when you fuck me!”.



He pushed her down onto the bed, climbing behind her spread legs. He slowly rubbed the head of his cock on the outside of her pussy, making her quiver. “Tell me you want it”, he says in a low voice. She turns her head to look at him, “I want it now”, she begs. Slowly gliding it inside her he starts to drill her from behind. He grabbed her hips to get even deeper, bouncing her against him in a fast pace. Rose bit down on a pillow to try to stifle her screams. Klaus pulled it out of her mouth, “oh no you don’t, scream baby. Let me know you like it”, and kept drilling into her. As he pulled her hair back, she grouned and “Cum for me baby. Cum for me now”, he yelled. “Oh my god! I’m gonna cum!”, she screamed. With one final thrust, Rose came on his cock with him, dripping from her climax. He smacked her ass then kissed the handprint, “that’s my girl”.

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