What is your opinion?
Most beautiful writing I have ever read! Hope you publish the book!
"Most beautiful writing I have ever read! The minimal typos oland grammatical errors can easily be ironed out. I geniuenly hope you publish the book! "
Two Hearts and a Puck
"Awesome love story, with some suspense! I would have liked a little more verbal interaction. Thank you for sharing."
2hearts & a puck
"Good reading "
2 hearts and a puck
"Great story. Would liked more interaction and less monolog. "
Two hearts and a puk
"I don’t write reviews at all. But this one deserved it. Writer, you are amazing. Take time to read this comment and feel pride. You did this. You made me captivated day by day and night to read this book. I even missed one of my pumping times to pump breast milk. Keep up the good work and stay safe during this pandemic. "
A lot of twist
"Talk about a lot of plot twist, overall the storyline is good there were just a lot of twist that sometimes didn't make since or the characters behavior was a complete turnoff. Towards then end the story was a bit rushed. There is a lot of potential here. "
2 hearts and a puck
"Looking forward 😁"
Toxic rships
"If you do write about Gus and Kylie hopefully their rship won't be as toxic? These two though...she should've really walked away. Loving someone sometimes involves knowing when to let go. They both need counselling. Rships like these are what's leading to high divorce rates, great for the good times but where the individuals won't be able to cope when it comes to the bad times. The females in the rship always suffer the most in them. "
Beautiful
"Its a beautiful story though with some sad parts in it but i enjoyed reading it til the end.."
Two Hearts and a Puck
"Great story overall. For me chapters were long and a little repetitive about how they felt. But a great read, a lot of emotions and mystery. "
Nice storyline
"Nice storyline. It is hard to read, because of the long sections or paragraphs. In the chapters The MC’s emotions are described several times almost the same way."
Two Hearts and a Puck
"It was a great story but was too long. "
Love
"Very interesting "
Two hearts and a puck
"Good story, but I had to skim over a lot. And I'm a great hockey fan, but the play by play was a bit much. I REALLY liked the mystery part of the murders. "
Two hearts and a puck
"It's kinda boring n too repetitive. Please speed up de suspense "
The lost sister
"The story is very long it’s taking along time for anything to happen but I like the characters and the plot it just feels like it is moving so slow "
Too much going on
"Too much going on. Focus. The dtory is eveywhere."
Too much and not enough all 0 if I could
"This book has a lot going on and no pay off. First the guy is in high school then he’s a police officer immediately then he is a hockey player. None of those things make sense. Then the murder mystery is just other plots thrown in that don’t mesh or even matter at times. The friends aren’t friends the alleged bestfriend is basically telling her to get over abuse towards the end. One guy attempts to assault her then it moves on like it never happened because he said I’m sorry. The entire story is a plot holes and fever dreams don’t even waste your time."
Slow and a lot of repeating
"Confusing and boring at same time"
