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Marie's Biker Adventure

"Felt the title should have been something like "Sharing Twins" or "Fantasy x's 2 comes true" (cheeky grin). You are definitely not shy in describing the scenes (pant, pant, pant. OOOOOHHH!!! LOL) I know it didn't happen every day but wow! Can't figure out how "Biker" got into the title because just because they both ride, doesn't make them "Biker's", so I had expected something totally different. At first I suspected that when she saw the shadows at the windows, it was going to turn out to be "club brothers" or prospects "sneaking a peek" and wondered it she was going to end up getting more than she bargained for! Enjoyed the story! Thanks!"

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My bike adventure

"Going downhill fast "

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