What is your opinion?
Unjust tyranny and unjust revenge…
"Rebecca’s Braid is a story about a person named Rebecca who goes through some very difficult things because someone wanted to get revenge against her father for a very evil thing that her father did. There’s lots of adventure and great characters in this tale, and the themes in the story are very thought provoking and relevant to the world that we live in. I enjoyed this story very much, and I highly recommend reading it!…"
A Surge of Sillyness
"The story borrowed lots from Disney's Tangled, though there're fresh elements with the werewolf, witch, and two kingdoms. The plot showcase morale cause & effect throughout, and straightforward timeline, though lots of plot points were forced. The characters are two dimensional & outrightly comedian in their respective ways. Rebecca/Rapunzel is a stereotypical damsel in distress, Corrfinn is not charming nor bright but determined in loving Rebecca/Rapunzel, unlike Swordin who had no reasoning for his action and in the end he's just Gryffilda's goon. The King gave flavour to the plot only at the beginning and his queen barely cause a ripple on the surface, even the goat (definitely deserves a name) was more functional than her. Gryffilda got the ambition in driving the plot, but lacks strategy and personally she deserved a clean death as her closing arc. The set is standard though Marmormond is an intriguing place to discover just how a werewolf kingdom would function, but also questionable since Rebecca's father knew Corrfinn's father hence, he should at least know somethings not right with Marmormond when full moon rise. The most unique element and I think the selling point of this story is how it is written in Shakspearean English (the dialogue that is) it gave nuance I never had when reading English story before and it was easy to swallow. As for Genre adherence, this would be better as comedy-fantasy rather than romance. The author could learn on crafting original storyline, plotting, & creating clever antagonist."
