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the invisible girl

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Summary

This is the story of a girl who can't take anymore. This is a story of anger of taking back what everyone has taken from her.

Status
Complete
Chapters
7
Rating
4.2 13 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

Ignored. Left on the outside. Lied to. It happens more often than one might think.

Lied to by people I thought supported me. Loved me. People I thought were my friends. I thought it was just my messed up brain telling me things. I was lied to by someone I considered by best friend.

I've moved quite a bit in the past 5 years. I've mostly stuck to myself because I have learnt many people have betrayed me. Now i feel as if i have no one. My parents are to involved in themselves to care about me. It's been me against the world since the minute I was born. Its nothing new to me.

This is the story of a girl who can't take anymore. This is a story of anger,of taking back what everyone has taken from her.

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Suspenseful

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Emotional

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Profound

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Good Writing

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Great Character

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Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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author

The vagueness really draws me in!

2 years
1
author

powerful beginning.

2 years
author

I love the more poetic beginning of the story

2 years

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