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What is your opinion?
Break in the Wind
"This is a really good read. Thank you, Deborah."
Great potential
"The plot is interesting. The punctuation is good, with minor errors that seem like typos, not lack of skill. I feel there was too much telling, where a scene could show more action, the characters could be fleshed out and show more personality. The story would, in my opinion be more engaging if the characters were more fleshed out. As it is I don't feel much connection or sympathy to the characters. I think the writer has great potential for improvement."
