Cindy Lou Harvell

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Sweet read

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The writing style gave it an olde timey feel. The plot was great, the characters full flavored. The writing was awesome.

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VvvV

Love a good vampire story. Expecially when the victim wins.

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Unique

I loved it. What a unique sequel to Peter Pan. Well worth the read.

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Interesting

I haven't finished reading this yet. I am on chapter 3 and have to say it is intriguing. I feel like it jumps tenses a couple of times and it rushes through what could be more fully explained about his hearing changes. I am going to keep reading.

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Not enough

Great read, very hot. I want to read more. Needs some spell check but nothing too bad. I am irritated this isn't finished. Get to work.

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sloppy

Poorly written. Lacks authenticity. No reality to be found here other than the actually brutality of the rape. Major plot holes.

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Stunning

I love this story. I so want to know what is going to happen next. This is such a realistic emotional human story. The writing is well-crafted, the plot perfectly woven. The characters are as real as it gets. I am going to wait impatiently for the next chapter. Please do get to work.

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Great potential

The plot is interesting. The punctuation is good, with minor errors that seem like typos, not lack of skill. I feel there was too much telling, where a scene could show more action, the characters could be fleshed out and show more personality.
The story would, in my opinion be more engaging if the characters were more fleshed out. As it is I don't feel much connection or sympathy to the characters. I think the writer has great potential for improvement.

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Good story

Overall I thought it was a good story. It stayed on track, It was wordier than I would have liked, more telling than showing but I feel the characters were well rounded and realistic.
I liked the plot - it was strong and straight forward
The writing style was a bit unusual for me. The POV showed everything, every thought and action which I feel might have been a bit too much. It didn't leave anything to the imagination. I think it might have been a better story if it were only from one POV.
The writing skills as far as Grammar were decent. There were minor spelling errors but not bad.
I look forward to future writings by this author as I believe he will be stronger with practice.

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Bravo

This is the third story of William's that I have read. This one is my favorite. The Feud was great. Very emotional and funny too. The Kid was good. This story is stellar. I am so impressed. Thank you William for sharing this with me.

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Worthy

This story started off a little slow for me. Because I have read Mr. Nuessle's stories before, I know this is one of his earlier works. So I knew it was going to pick up, which it did. Chapter two got my attention and held it. The characters are well fleshed out and believable. The plot was sound. By Chapter three I couldn't stop reading. I was completely engaged with the story, wanted the The Kid to win the girl of his dreams. The realistic plot guaranteed nothing of the sort. This is an emotional read. The morals in this story are high bar and inspiring. Thank Mr. Nuessle for sharing your considerable talents.

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Needs work

Clumsy use of language.

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