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Great.

"I love that it was from the twisted perspective of David and how he saw humanity and why. Emma was something else. Great read."

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The Journal Of David Long

"Very twisted, but a good one!"

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The Journal of David Long

"Very good book loved it 👍 "

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The diary of David Long

"This book is a deep look into a serial killers mind.it is a very warped sick book but it does just how sick they truly are."

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The Journal of David Long

"The story was sick and yet I still couldn't quit reading it I really liked the ending "

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Wow

"The story was captivating and terrifying. I couldn't imagine the pain and suffering that his victims endured. Quite well written though it gives me cold chills. Complete madness.. Quite the horror story. Though hard to digest the horror within it."

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Interesting

"I've never seen anything like it"

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Interesting

"I've never read anything like it. Very interesting "

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Good story, could use some work

"Overall the story was a fun read. Though it would be good to go through your story and look for mistakes with punctuation and the spelling of different words."

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The Journal of David Long

"Well it was both good and not so much. Left alot of unanswered questions. It's good writing but (like me) a little all over the place and the ending could've been wayyy better. Maybe give a little view into Emma's head at the very end or even more so through out the story. "

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