What is your opinion?
Overall good
"My only thing I’d like done different is the explanation of the torture/dual personality of Loki. Is it fixed now? How did that happen? Otherwise a good quick read. "
THE HYBRID IN THE CELL
"I enjoyed this story❣️ It was certainly different than I expected, but I enjoyed it. The main characters had depth. There were some unanswered questions, but I loved the happy ending. "
The Hybrid in the Cell
"Actually a thoroughly enjoyable story with a perfect ending 👍"
The hybrid in the cell
"Brilliant and refreshing. Absolutely loved it and kept me reading until I’d finished it! "
Amazing
"I love this story you were able to describe their inner workings, their feelings, their environments and how they interacted with each other very well. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you for sharing."
The hybrid in the cell
"I love the plot , I don’t have friends, I have family and the are not avid readers like myself, "
Review
"The plot is so engaging, it leaves you yearning for more chapters."
Seems Unfinished
"I liked the story, but much is left to interpretation. Loki's first marriage isn't ever explained, and who was controlling him?? He was only pardoned for saving Odin, which technically doesn't prove innocence. He just did an even greater deed for the magical realm. I would love to read another book that goes into more detail about those things and starts them on a new adventure. "
A lot of ideas that would deserve to be developed
"There are some good ideas but it feels like everything is happening too fast. It makes no sense to have them share a room if he's supposed to be dangerous. There are weird jumps in time when she's in the hospital and suddenly she's in a different world and then back to the hospital?! I feel like the story was written in a rush and sometimes it's just a flow of ideas written as it they popped in the mind of the writer. I didn't read the whole story because I couldn't focus on it anymore. So, some good ideas that would benefit to be developed and sorted to give more sense and strength to the plot. "
Hybrid in the cell
"Please review the notes i made. Why didn't he return to Earth to defend it from their doom? Isn't Emily going to be bored just sitting there? She had an awesome career. Why does she need to breed? "
