What A Silly Mistake! by Aditya at Inkitt
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What a silly mistake!

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Summary

Its a story of mouse who trusted his instinct and unknown withot questioning. How all this led to a sad phase in his life and how he came out of his sadness.

Genre
Fantasy/Humor
Author
Aditya
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Mistakes are part of life.

Start writing here…Once upon a time there was a rat, whose name was Shakti. She loved experimenting with her life. One day a mighty power who she assumed to be God gave her a power to change her form into any desired form. Mouse at once wanted to become a lion. Mouse thought that I have turned into a real lion so she went deep into the Jungle and roared in front of a real lion. The original lion who thought a new lion is challenging him roared at her. Mouse ran for her life. She thought God has bluffed me he gave me power to change my form but why did I fear a lion?

Mouse had several times seen this lion not going near man. So she thought let’s try and become a man. So she turned himself into a man. Once again he went to the Jungle and went pass the lion. This time lion didn’t bother him. He thought this is good that I have become a man now I will remain a man.

One day he went to the river and started taking bath where men used to take bath. Men were taking bath in there wearing clothes. Lower part of their body was covered. But Shakti never felt any shame in opening his clothes and bathing without clothes. So he started to remove his clothes for bathing. This is the time when some of the men present there revolted against him. They said “why are you opening your clothes? This is a public place if you want to take bath nude, please leave from here”.

Shakti felt bad. This was not justice, he never felt shame in opening his clothes. Why is he forced to wear clothes if he doesn’t want to. But there was a question in his mind why are other men not opening his clothes. Aren’t they as confident as he was? He thought maybe God has bluffed him. But how could he go near the lion being a man and lion never bothered me. That means I have been given a boon. He sat there thinking and observing. After while he realised that he has only changed his external form. His internal form is still of a mouse. So he was a mouse looking like a man.


Shakti had created a blunder. But that was no time for panic he smiled and changed his form into that of a man internally. He wished I want to be a man forever.

Something changed within him. This time he felt sudden urge to cover his body. He felt fine this time. Now he could understand why those men were revolting against him. He agreed that they were right.

Once he became a man he realised that things which he could eat as mouse were no more appealing to him now. Now he felt more inclined towards food which were generally accepted by men.

After some days went to the park. He got an idea while watching some girls racing in the park. Why not to defeat these girls in race. It will be fun. So he changed his form into that of a female. She raced and won.

Now once again she wanted to become male but she could not. Instead she turned into eunuch(transgender) .

Days passed by but she could not change into male once again. She used lot of power to change her form. And all the effort was in vain. She was devastated. How could this be happening. It was better that I was a female. She became sad and started looking for an answer to get her life back to normal.

Several months passed by. One day she went to that park where she had raced . She saw some little girls again, playing and racing among themselves. They were giggling, laughing and enjoying life. She thought being a female is not that bad why not use that spell to become a female. So she used that spell and changed herself back into female. This was her silly mistake. She never realise that she can turn into female anytime but not become a man.


Another realisation which took in her was she had bluffed that day those girls by changing form and winning the race by cheating even when she was elder to them. Way she cheated others she got cheated by herself. So justice was done to her when she could not turn back into a original form and instead turned into eunuch.

She made a resolve to herself. I do lots of experiment in my life. From now on I will be brave but not foolish. I will be slow and steady. I will use my powers with responsibility.


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