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Emotional

"What a sad but beautiful story, just goes to show how these disorders can mess with the mind, take over and destroy people, I feel so sorry for all the characters in this story, i know it's fiction but the sad truth is this happens in real life. Excellent writing, it really hit where it hurts."

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LGBTQ affirming but heart-rending

"I appreciated the graphic descriptions of emotional turmoil including contributions from supportive parents. It felt good to hear that the life of an LGBTQ individual was honoured with love and devotion by a wider audience."

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Wow I

"This story was so flipping sad I cried so much at the end I don’t think I’ve cried this much over a book 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧it was great but sad"

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The Butterfly Effect

"It made the readers feel how the characters felt and it made us cry in the end. Overall, the story's great however it ends."

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Sad

"If only he gets treatment, the story will be different😭😭😭😭"

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Loved it and sobbed

"I love how real the story is. Every once in a while I need to read a story that doesn’t have a fairy tail “happy ending”. I would recommend this to anyone going through a mental health problem or anyone who knows someone with one. I enjoyed this and sobbed the entirety of the last two chapters, and give props the the author for being able to make a story like this. They did it right."

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Oh my... Jesus!

"This book doesn’t more then tell a story. It shows just how mentally troubling an eating disorder is and how it can effect the people around you as well as yourself. I cried so much reading this. This is so powerful and I applaud the author."

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I love the fact that it is realistic

"It's awesome and beautiful not a cliche romantic book its very realistic"

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Ano

"Bro This was actually such a great book and I cried a span but couldn’t stop reading it. The way you wrote actually made me feel like I was a part of the story. The whole story made me pretty happy.Well done👏🏾👏🏾😭"

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True love, thats what the story should have been titled

"I want to know you better because an author like must be truly amazing , I cried I laughed I smile as much as hunter and I was also angry thank you for this it is the best, did you know anyone personally with a eating disorder? Any way I felt so much emotion thank you thank you so much"

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Realistic Vibes

"This book was amazing. I cried at the end jut because of how real and truthful if was. Luke was dealing with so much and Hunter wasn't enough in a sad, twisted way. I believe that this book will open the eyes of people about anorexia. The LGBTQ+ community and the stuff they deal with is also in this book. The writer of this book obviously did the homework about the stuff they were writing about. It was very realistic and truthful. I enjoyed the book so much and could not stop reading it. I hope the writer continues writing and focusing on the things that are important to them."

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It's sad that he refused treatment.

"I hoped he would eventually take treatment. If not for anyone but Hunter. "

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The Butterfly Effect.

"This was an amazing read. It was very emotional for me and the ending made me sad but I know if it ended any other way, it wouldn't be as prefect as I thought it was. The characters daily interactions and getting to know more about them and who they are completely drew me in and made it that much more of an experience. I related to Hunter and Luke in some ways which made me enjoyed this book. It was definitely worth the heartache."

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The Butterfly Effect

"While there is a wealth of information on clouds: how it's formed, why it get it's name and what is it's effect to weather phenomena, there seem to be an information block out on the specific eating disorder which seem to be the key where the story revolves. I still like the story though"

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Butterfly effect (great story)

"I love how it didn't end the stereotypical way but rather ended like things in real life ends sad but this sort of happy. Overall a very gripping and real story. Loved it"

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The butterfly effect

"This is my first time reading this kind of story. Cried over the sad ending. Thank u & hope to read more of ur stories."

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