What is your opinion?
Anjalverse Mayhem
"An amazing story. I loved the action between the different dimensions and the different variants of the characters. The emotions portrayed through this story were spectacular as well. I loved the little moments where ABDO 2.0 would struggle with his background and ignore his brother. The humor was good, too. A few technical errors here and there, but nothing extreme. I'm going on to read the next book, happy writing!"
Anjalverse mayhem
"This novel is very intriguing. The humour is top class and i enjoy it a lot. Keep it up,abdo. I wonder where the story proceeds! "
Humorous and Unique
"I enjoyed the humor of this book with this genre dying out. It's an entertaining read, even in script format with all of the characters unique in their own way. The storyline is complex yet easy to follow along with. Anyone looking for a lighthearted story should read the tale of Abdo and his friends. "
Great story!
"I love the comedy!🤩 And this is the first book that I have enjoyed that is set up like this! Well done it had me at the start.♥️"
I laugh too often 🤣
"This is the first time I have been reading a dialogue novel, and I loved it! Abdo is the type of character we saw in our childhood, such as Danny Phanton, Typical Andy, Filmore, Ron, and so on. I really like how he made each of his characters with their own personality and kept going on with it, instead of them getting bland after some time. I recommend anyone who likes sci-fi and comedy to give this book a chance. Great job, Abdo!!🌸"
A Hilarious Inter-Dimensional Journey
"The story is written in the manner of a stageplay, and follows the adventures of a band of goofballs as they travel across the multiverse. This story has it all- fourth-wall breaks, slapstick, and just general craziness. If you're looking for something funny, this is the story you're looking for!"
A comedic Series of mishap
"A comedic Series of mishap between Abdo his brother Omar and his friends. I felt like this story was really easy to read because it read like a script. The characters were funny they reminded me of the captain underpants books. Overall, I loved the character Omar he is my favorite character in the story he is funny and caring for his brother Abdo. One thing you should critique is a foot note describing the characters and dimensions, offering more background story. Overall, the story was amazing."
Nice work
"Okay, so it’s time to review your work. I am glad I came across your work. The plot is amazing and I am loving it. Certain characters could benefit from additional descriptions. Additionally, the use of emojis might provoke writers (just joking). I appreciate humor, but there are moments when it's necessary to refrain from jokes, particularly in serious circumstances. However, I have employed some of these jokes in real life. Nevertheless, I love it so far. Keep going strong, hoping to read further. "
Splendid work, author!
" "Abdo, a funny teen, finds himself in a hilarious misadventure that forces his friends and brother, Omar, to follow the same chaotic path to bring him back. I love the unique writing style—it's fresh and unlike anything I’ve read before, though it did slow my reading pace a bit. I can't wait to see what unfolds next!""
amazing
"I liked this adventure. It is not my favorite type of novel, but it is easy. It depends mainly on the characters’ dialogues. It is written in a non-complicated manner and the reader can become involved with it. Continue, my friend. "
A Fun Ride Overall
"Anjalverse Mayhem offers a hilarious, action-packed story with some heart. The characters are like-able and well-written. The humor is spot-on. The fight scenes are exhilarating. However, it’s written in stageplay form, which is kinda lacking in depth, although it keeps the events quick-paced. There are some grammatical mistakes, but they don’t detract from the experience much. The plot also suffers from some pacing issues. Regardless, Anjalverse Mayhem is a joy to read, and I recommend it to you. "
