Pictures of Silver

Meira01

13 chapters read

Jun 26, 2017

From The Clubhouse To The Churchhouse

"This story was a realistic and emotional quick read. A lost young man finds redemption in the absolute last place he ever wanted to and frees himself from a destructive self-indulgent lifestyle. The transformation of Devon from heartless sex machine to caring human being was a bit too fast paced for my liking but still believable. Definitely recommend for anyone who wants a clean and wholesome romance story rather salacious smut with little if any true plot."

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Katie Reynolds

14 chapters read

Jun 24, 2017

Enjoyable read.

"The first chapter of your story hooked me to read on. It is a great opening chapter, where Devon has a very wayward personality. He likes to sleep around, go to clubs and all sorts. Throughout the book, he discovers the word of God and chooses to change his immoral lifestyle to a respectful and modest man. I am not overly religious. I don't follow any particular religion. However, I can see why people do love God and choose to go to church and whatnot. There were some parts I found difficult to read, some things I disagreed with but we all have opinions and our own ideas about life. I can appreciate how hard you have worked on this book. Overall, I did enjoy it and would recommend to potential readers. There were some spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes but it didn't affect my ability to read this book to the end. Well done! All the best, Katie xx"

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