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Nice

"Not that good but liking it "

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Great writer

"They just want to blow a small thing up for no reason. I have a pets and I understand stood that there was no animals ab**s. I sometimes trip on my dog too. Good luck 🍀 on your exams and don’t stop writing. "

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Story opinion

"I like the plot very much I love a thing that you didn’t drag the story unnecessarily and you just kept. Love life of hero and heroine or I should say scenes of hero and heroine with out any unnecessary drama in between "

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I liked everything the storyline and writting skills r amazing 👏

"I liked everything the storyline and writting skills r amazing 👏 U deserve everything so 5 stars baby"

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Intresting

"Really interesting to read "

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Sinful desire

"The books tropes are my favourite and I love the spice "

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I really like the characters I recommend to my friends I just love it❤

"I really love your book ❤😍😘"

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just loved it

"bro its just too good I'm in love with this book please don't stop writing this book see basically i read this book while travelling so i cant comment on the book but its too good trust me I'm just waiting for the next part i literally open inkitt to only read your book its so good one of the best book I've ever read till now so don't doubt your and go on you are writhing for your self so trust me to book is good so good and best , and stop self doubting acha I need to go now trust me it's too good . Thank You Believe in yourself."

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I personally liked this book a lot the characters and the way you show them how she found out about him and told him to leave that broke my heart a little but knowing they would meet again excites me looking forward to next chapters...

"I loved the main leads a lot The way he calls her cupcake and looks at her has my heart .. And that the pet jaguar ..wow.. I think my obsession with the mafias pet would just increase more and more after this...."

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Love it

" The book itself tells so much and i love this book endlessly 💗 screaming blushing and everything OMG Author you killed it!!! Most importantly i love the way you explain each and evrything about their intimate scene and still keep it story short yet erotic as you claim . "

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The Captivating Mafia Book❤️

"One of the best books, with the best plot, I ever read online...... this book held me captive of reading those chapters within an hour's time."

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Sinful craving

"Author i need a man who'll call me cupcake 😩 I just read 5 chapters and it got me all. Now I just wanna lose my memory to read it again. Someone please aim a brick at me(smoking hot man is also accepted). Damnnnnnnn the writing style, the emotions are so streamy and surreal 💟"

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Ayala and Stefan

"Love the chemistry and mischief of there love story We want more"

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I liked it

"I like their chemistry, and this also have plot of mafia's well there goes + plus point. I would recommend spicy readers And rating will be 4.6"

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Sinful cravings

"this book could have been so much more better then it is "

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A lot of potential, lost me

"Had so many ways it could’ve gone but it feels rushed, all over the place with no real direction. Didn’t even get to finish "

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