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Ouroboros

"Though it remains unclear where the title comes from, this short story is an absolute must read!! The story is religious but it is a fictional religion, so no one should be fronted. The characters are described beautifully and there are also moments of humour."

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We All Need A Tariq On Our Shoulders

"If you want a thought-provoking, ribs-busting tale of religion look no further than Ouroboros! The characters are an absolute riot, and more often than I care to admit, I wondered where I could get the book of hilarious quotes so I could have something to laugh at every morning. We travel back in time with a judgemental preacher and her surprisingly friendly snake. Look back at that sentence. How could you not want to read that story?! I promise you won't be disappointed. I look forward to reading more of this author's work."

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MUST READ!!!

"The characters are so lovable in this. The main character and her snake were so hilarious. This story just stands above the rest in dialogue and in depth characters. I loved that she ends up causing the death of the saint that her religion loves so much. It was pretty deep, especially in a humor piece. Very well done."

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Hilarious

"What a great story! I don't normally read the longer ones but I coulnd't stop reading this one! I am amazed it is not number one! I love the idea of everything coming full circle! Everything was well polished and well paced and I got quite a few laughs from the snake!"

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Wow, just wow!

"I don't even know where to start! Ha ha, I LOVED LOVED LOVED this story. I thought it was really well-written, the voice was perfect and polished. I loved the characters, they all felt so real -- even the snake! I felt like these were actual people I could meet and get to know. I loved the dialogue and felt that it all flowed naturally. There is really no other way to say it except I could see this as a published book. I just felt like the way the story unfolded and concluded was perfectly done. Thank you so much for such a great read!!"

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Ouroboros

"I'm new to this site so please excuse any amateur mistake . . . (Does title mean title of the review or the story?) Anyway, though, I love this. It's a great beginning - interesting, witty, and with a touch a humor that makes any good story great. I do admit that I am a bit confused about the terminology (year of the Ox, the time frame, etc.) but I suppose that will be explained later in the story. Overall, fantastic job!"

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