I'm new to this site so please excuse any amateur mistake . . . (Does title mean title of the review or the story?)
Anyway, though, I love this. It's a great beginning - interesting, witty, and with a touch a humor that makes any good story great. I do admit that I am a bit confused about the terminology (year of the Ox, the time frame, etc.) but I suppose that will be explained later in the story. Overall, fantastic job!
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