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Memory Chasers

"It was slow to start. And only became interesting during the last half of the book it could have used a little more resolution at the end."

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Memory chasers

"I liked the story, it had me captivated from the beginning. I hope they continue the story with another book. The only thing that puts me off was that it ended to quick. What happened to the children they saved? Did they start the school? Did they stop the others trying to kill mediums and Seers? Please continue this story"

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Memory chasers

"One of the best books I've read in a long time you're riding skills are superb storytelling is very good you got a bright future thanks for letting me read the book 😊"

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Memory chasers was a really enjoyable book

"I really enjoyed reading memory chasers, I agree it would be a great series so many things u could do with it "

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Memory Chasers

"Loved it! I would definitely like to read more from these characters!"

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Came from your other writing.

"You had mentioned this link from your other stories and I just had to come and read it. I read it all in one sitting and I seriously wish there was more. *hands you scones* Do you plan on more? Or, perhaps, or another story?"

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intriguing

"I don't read this type of book often but did read the whole Harry Potter series. When the characters became real in my mind I wasn't able to stop until I reached the end. Now I want to read what happened next."

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A 90's Baby Must read

"Very relatable. The more eccentric characters bring this novel home and the details on the Information Technology Field bring this into your daily life. This is a great immersive read. -- If you are a J.K Rowling or Diane Duane lover this your chance. "

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Memory chasers

"I need more! Great characters, amazing plot. Definitely needs a second set of eyes for final touch up. This is an amazing start please finish it."

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Memory Chasers

"I loved the characters so much and even though I couldn't relate, people of this sort are easy to find. Ending was admittedly, unpredictable and exciting. Hope for a sequel because who doesn't want to read about a realistic, modern version of the beloved Hogwarts? Nevertheless I must say that certain paragraphs looked as if they were written to be skipped, meaning there was a little overload on details here and there. This is a whole new idea you're talking about! Might as well consider the level of intellect readers basically have. Usually I'm not this frankly rude when it comes to reviews but since I badly NEED a sequel, stating minute issues would help making it the best. Love Frost and actually spent quite a couple of days desperately trying to find the extent of reality in both the plot of your novel and Frost. Love your writing style as well. Assure that you've got yourself a fan."

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Memory chasers

"I bonded with the characters very well. They are relatable and despite the shortness of the novel fleshed out and characterized, which adds lots of depth to the story. The philosophical parts of the story are well included and actually drive the plot, besides giving some food for thought. There are still lots of open questions left (maybe there is a sequel?), but all in all, the ending was satisfying for me. I'd love to read more about a wandless Hogwarts featuring someone whose role model is Hermione. "

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Great first effort! Now expand, delve, give more details!!

"I really love the basic ideas underlying the plot, but I wish they had been explored in more detail. This novella could easily be expanded into a longer book and series."

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Classics

"Classic story. It's almost like they did it almost 100 years ago in Tolkien's times. Well thought through. Close to modern realities. The downside follows. It's amazingly boring reading given the plot. Well, I find Tolkien boring too."

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Frost

"Fascinating"

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Memory Chasers

"I didn't read Harry Potter so I can't offer a comparison. I love the characters; quirky Erik, Rachel, Moe and Rena in particular.The story was engrossing, and the conflict (internal and external) kept me reading. Ideal beginning for a series."

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Shout out to all Potterheads

"Overall, the book was indeed a good read. It is reconmended highly for J.K. Rowling fans, as it is very relatable. However, I wished it was more realistic, which would make it easier to analyse and compare. On the other hand, I must compliment the author's excellant writting style, quite extraordinary and flawless."

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Memory chasers

"Very confusing with all of the ideas of frost and the book and the way Erick deals with it the back and forth with his sister and brother in law is funny and strange this book is hard to read because of frost. "

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Truth, Thought and Memory

"This was a very good story. I like how you made truth, thought and memory into something specific. Are Truth, Thought and Memory a place or maybe an idea? By the way the ‘storyteller’ suggests Truth, Thought and Memory is most likely people or maybe even one person. My favorite bit in the Memory Chasers was: ‘ “We’re not telling you,’ said Rena. ‘Why should we? We’ve just met you. My brother only knew you for, what, two days tops? He might find you harmless, bless his trusting heart, but I see no reason.” ’ But is opening a school for wizards the best idea? I think this course of action will only bring Truth closer and we all know what happens when they got too close to Truth . . . Call me a fan."

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