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Great book!

"Really loved reading this! The author made a fantastic story and their writing was also well done! It was different from the typical vampire books but that's what made it special! "

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Viel of Anicent Vows

"It's a really good story that is way different than expected. Thirst for more, I was hooked on this story. Great plot and characters. Excellent job!"

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Love this story!

"I’m loving this story, it’s been so sad which I did not expect but a welcome surprise. Keep up the good work! I wonder what will happen next… I hope Mira gets to see Rillan again."

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Veil of Ancient Vows

"I really enjoyed this take on the creation of vampires! The conversations it brought up about wielding a person, having access to such powers and sacrificing for the greater good built the tension surrounding the main characters relationship. "

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Good book

"Good book. Great plot and great characters "

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Wonderful story

"I very much enjoyed this story! The writing was wonderful, the characters well written, and just the right amount of tension with a HAE ending! Hopefully there will be a second book and we can see how the characters get on!"

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Veil Of Ancient Vows

"What a story! So it wasn’t the Moon Goddess that made wolves and vampires but it was the Druids?! An unusual and addictive plot that was dark and sad but also happy and sweet; very saucy at times as well. A very well written and edited book, I absolutely loved it. "

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Amazing Story

"The characters are well developed. You find yourself rooting for the vampire and his companion. You aren't really aware of the time frame of the story other than it's during the time of the druids until the vampire gets an assassination order. Then, certain historical names make you realize it's set during Romes' occupation of Britain. It adds a bit of context to what had previously seemed like a pretty isolated story about a warrior turned vampire to protect his people and the young woman sent to be his companion. You begin to understand at that point why the druids went to such lengths and why the warrior volunteered to do this. I will admit the ending surprised me. I love this story. No notes on improving. From what I've seen, A run through Grammerly for the few mistakes I've noted in the side bar should do it. It's more ready for publishing than most of the books on here."

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An origin story that is unusual, interesting, and chilling

"Gripping take on supernatural origins- I like that this tale was more of a historical fiction to explain the start of some of our favorite supernatural creatures with an unusual, rather dark romance woven in. I think the open ending fits perfectly with this book, but I was a little confused about Mira at the end; I won't spoil anything, though. So while I don't think a sequel is necessary, I wouldn't mind seeing a fast forward to how the world might look now as a result of the events in this novel. "

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Vampire love

"Storyline so captivating can't put the book down"

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