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The First Ones

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Summary

I heard her voice echo. I turned around to see who it was. There she stood with long blonde ringlets, sea blue eyes and the pinkest lips..... "I know what you are and I'm not afraid," she said. I lean in closer to notice her beautiful face, "You should be." Thereticus Mortimus discovers an unusual girl with abilities in the forest. His curiosity about who or what she is takes his life for a thrilling turn. Discovery of her origins awakens the First One Vampires-the most beautiful, evil, and strongest vampires alive.

Genre
Scifi,Horror
Author
inkedup
Status
Complete
Chapters
17
Rating
4.0 (3 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

How It All Began

Bloody Search

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