Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Nothing Personal
"I like the different characters and the emotions Dawn goes through for the two boys. I enjoyed reading the few chapters you currently have. I can't wait to see more from this story. Happy writing :)"
Beginning
"Story starts out strong, about a love triangle the main girl is in. From a technical standpoint I don't see anything that needs to be improved- the writing and style are all solid. The start to this story seems promising. "
