What is your opinion?
Bloody Love
"I really liked this story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"
Bloody love
" I love this it was amazing and when I felt that I need a little bit of drama in my life I would read it and when it got to the spicy Sean I had to stop reading out loud"
Bloody Love
"I think that a twisted Cinderella story throws readers off a bit as I was hesitant to read this as well. It's great for a short story, but it could be a full novel diving into further details in this great plot. Characters were developed and plot for a short story. I enjoyed the twist of the story. Great short!"
Brilliant
"Loved this story can’t wait to read more"
Bloody Love
"Great short story Of two hearts that beat with true love. She had been mistreated her whole life. He found her and realized she was his"
Bloody Love
"I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Cinderella story with a twist! With Halloween just a few days away, this was a great time to read it. I liked the hidden strength of Mary and how she endured the verbal and physical abuse until she was given the opportunity to choose a better life for herself. Definitely an HEA read!"
Wow
"Great spin on an old tale! Enjoying the story!"
Bianca
"I loved everything about the story especially LORD BLACKWOOD 😍❤️ the character he displayed was Astonishing ❤️"
Fabulously Dark True Love Story!
"A dark take on the old Cinderella tale! Very fast paced, unexpected twists! Great expected and unexpected characters! Definitely will re read & recommend!! "
Darkly Superb 🩷
"This was so different to what Arri normally writes but it was just as amazing as her other books. A dark Cinderella story was definitely not on my bingo card but I was happy to give it a go and so glad I did. Arri’s imagination is far beyond awesome. I can’t wait to see what she comes up with next. "
Bloody love
"Oh my goodness Mary is going to be a bad ass vampire."
Blood love
"It is very interesting story .so far I like it"
Intriguing Cinderella twist….
"When I first read the summary I somehow thought that the male lead was going to be an alien. I think the story could gain more attention with the description of what type of other worldly being he is instead as lots of people are into that type. I am not stating it here though in case that type of other worldly being is supposed to be a surprise. That being said… I was pleasantly surprised by the twist of the classic Cinderella story. I can’t remember if I found this story under “new erotica” or “new action”. It definitely reads more like action and it is more like a PG13 level of sexual activity. So, I wouldn’t classify it as erotica but that may not matter if I found it under action. Sorry I can’t remember that clearly as I saved several books that same night I found this one. Although this is a short story I do believe that there is a lot of potential for growth and expansion in this story. I could genuinely see this twisted Cinderella story being made into a movie, but it would definitely need a more detailed story line and possibly more detailed character development. There was a good bit of narration from a past tense that describes what has happened over various days or weeks or months that speed the story along. Although that works for a short story it could be lengthened out if more of those sections were written out in a first person dialogue. I would personally love to see this story expanded upon. I think it could help if more details were added in the set up to more clearly describe the time frame and location of this story. As there are so many different Cinderella versions that exist in different periods of time. I think it would be beneficial to being able to envision this story more clearly with more details describing the time period and location of this story. I also think it could be beneficial in creating more suspense and fear if there were more scenes (or even just one scene) early on that create a better understanding of the vultures and the fear they create for the public about going out at night. Maybe, Mary hears her mother and sister talking about the town gossip of someone being attacked by those wretched night beings or whatever they were called in the beginning. Maybe one evening the mom and sister Insist that Mary goes out to collect more wood for their fire and Mary hears or sees or feels or even has a close call with these vultures or night monsters. I would also LOVE to see that because of Mary’s special bloodline her to have more significant magical powers once she transitions that is capable of great destruction to the vultures or to her sister. Something that makes her a truly powerful weapon in and of herself. Maybe she was being starved all of her life by her step mother for the purpose of keeping her weak or maybe her step mother had always insisted on giving her a special tea that had its own magical ability to keep her natural bloodline suppressed and making her extremely submissive but once she is out from under that influence she is emboldened with a depth of power, strength, and authority she never knew she had inside of her. If the author would like to collaborate on ideas for expanding the story I have more ideas… just let me know under the comments and I would be happy to email or message some other way to share my ideas. If not, no worries. I definitely recommend reading this twisted Cinderella story. I liked it a lot. "
Interesting, and Sweet
"I loved this dark, and exciting take on a Cinderella story. It was clever and full of surprises. I really enjoyed this story, the only change I would love to see is the vampires war with the vultures. I feel like the vampires are just jumping in blind when they are battling the vultures. They should have a better strategy, they are supposed to be wiser, and way more clever. It's like they have no idea what to do when it comes to the vultures and that just makes no sense, because a vampire would be an amazing thinker sense they've been around for so long. Anyways that was the only think I found off with the story. Thank you author for such a amazing perspective of a Cinderella story it was brilliant..."
It's okay
"Started good but towards the end everything was so rushed and it was like the author wanted to achieve everything possible in a matter of few pages It's a nice read though"
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