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Rida

"The story is really nice but its left incomplete no ending no moral no closure it is not complete and that ruins overall experience such a nice story why no ending to it"

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Keep fighting hun

"There were a few miss spellings. Found myself stuck on following the woman,she was ,is trying so hard to be strong yet every time she tries he turns her strength Into a weakness.playing her feelings, emotions against her. He acts like he cares for her,that he loves her,but the truth is it's just a game to him,all he wants is to save his own skin.and if using her to accomplish that task is what he has to do then he'll do it. She's right and saying that he is no different than his father just another cruel person surrounding her world. Except for unlike the father he is far worse Father hides the cruel intentions. But the Son makes cool intentions very obvious and forthright, Even though sometimes they might seem confusing. The father is just a murderer,the son is someone who enjoys pain,breaking control of others. I hope she finds a way to break free of them both she doesn't deserve this confusion,sadness,, being told who she is or isn't,we control ourselves. The maid trying to make excuses for him was just wrong it doesn't matter what happened to you growing up doesn't give you the right to hurt others."

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La segunda parte por favor

"Me gustó la narración y como lleva los personajes pase por varias emociones, la sumisión a la que lleva el personaje me choca bastante pero el ímpetu de isabela hace querer leer la novela. Si la recomendaría aquellos que le guste este tipo de novelas en entorno a la mafia,poder y amor. "

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Damiano

"I liked everything but what I disliked most is that the story does not really have an ending like I want her to die and famiano te beg for her And the I would recommend this to my book reader friend I put this rating because it is wonderful"

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This book is supper excited 🌚🌚🌚😏😏

"I like the way she is express her felling...it is supper amazing....and I want to promote this book to my future husband...its very nice..."

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Damiano a dark mafia romance

"Absolutely loved this book. Wish it was completed in 1 novel instead of a second book. Great reading and the main plot to this book is different. Can't wait read book 2.. "

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Damiano and Carina are masterpieces

"First, I have to say - I WANT MORE! PLEASE! The dynamics in this story are so gripping that I lost track of reading and got sucked in. The plot here is fantastic. It's morally gray, charged, and FORBIDDEN! Definitely a story I will be reading a second time and taking notes because WOW, the relationship between these two is amazing complicated! "

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Completely hooked on this one

"Can't wait for part two."

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Love for this story

"I can't wait for the HAPPY ending,...right?, HAPPY Damiano 🥺, I can't wait to see him and her talk trough it all I despite his father 😡😤 "

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About the novel

"I freaking love it! Oh gosh I lost my words! Thank you for creating this beautiful story I’m sooooo inlove with it! I’ve been searching for this kind of story! I hope you’ll do well on the next novel!"

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This BOOK

"the whole thing was one of the best dark romances I have ever read. Like I was on the eg of my seat the entire time giggling and waiting till Doniano was gonna do something else to her skin. And the branding at the end. AHH"

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"Good book so far "

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ADORED!!!

"I am in love with Damiano! His character plays the game well. He truly cares for her freedom without asking much in return except to play by the rules. Carina, while I understand her objections to obedience training, frustrated me a bit. I made it chapter 6, by the way. But I always said if a character is frustrating me, the author has done their job at writing! Very well written and i look forward to reading the rest!"

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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect on Discord: flemingmichelle28"

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This book was definitely a good one. Would recommend to my dark romance lovers ♡

"10/10 would reccomend to my dark romance lovers Dont read around others lol One of the first dark romance books i actually completed reading, cant wait to read the next book!!!♡♡♡"

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luhggvvjvddh

"lovegghhvcgddg"

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Love and hate

"I’m loving this book it is a magnificent read "

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Great Story!

"I couldn't put this story down! Can't wait for the next one! "

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Damiano

"This story has a lot of sadness. Hopefully she will give Damiano some hope and ultimately find love."

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Chomping at the bit

"This book is has me chomping at the bit for more. Your writing is beautiful put together & the story is captivating and leaves wanting more! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!"

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