Shayla ennis

Northampton mass

I love writing as well as reading.I've always found fantasy fiction in all its directions fascinating,intriguing.always looking for new inspiration.

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What's next

I've read all three of Molly's stories I was hooked from the beginning I could not put down any of what she had to say but now that I've come to the tail end of her journey I am wondering what will come next in fact I want to know if she will keep fighting or if her children will take over I'd really like to see what happens next in the journey that may go forward

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Yes

This story was the best going to read the rest then give a full say.

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I really hope you keep the series going I'm already starting book 2 as I have just finished book 1 I am so hooked by this series that putting it down it's become impossible it is true that there are a lot of parts in here that can be a bit harsh but there is a lot of love as It's a combination I'm up to and downs and ins and outs what is the true essence of the world and how it truly functions whether it is Supernatural or real for us sometimes the world is harsher than it seems and this is how for many of us we see the world for those of us in the fictional writing or even for those of us who write the reality we find our own ways to express how we see the world falling apart and how we see it coming together when I read this story it reminded me so much of how I saw my world falling apart and coming together and by that I mean how I survived after my accident it's actually how I got into writing myself I needed an outlet and writing became my outlet it allowed me to express and create a puzzle through that expression and now I tell the people in the real world true fiction My Reality so thank you for expressing your version of your reality and your emotions it was a wonderful experience and I hope you continue to write I can't wait to see what you come up with next looking forward to it

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Ok could be better

I don't want to be disrespectful I found it okay but I also found it a bit cliche maybe it's just me but I think the fact that you tried to make a pov of using characters from Twilight just seems to be a bit Auto out of the way. But at the same time I also found it interesting you tried to put a Twist to Bella Swan's storyline by changing it up you tried to make it so that she became a vampire for a different reason that it was a her own choice in a cord due to a sad meaning factor in her life that turned into a happy one rather than because she was forced into it due to circumstances changing but I think that moving forward you should try to make more changes to her story if you are going to do something like this and I think that in this case if you're going to continue that maybe you should use different character names rather than the same ones I know it's supposed to be a part of pov but I think that it could be its own story all together. If you made a few more changes in a different set of areas but that's just my opinion. Other than that well done and great work it really gave me a different perspective on how Bella saw things and her little world as it got bigger

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Keep up the good work

This story was really fascinating and had me hooked up my seat. Perspective of a struggle from the girls side but also as well the struggle it seemed show from the man's side but it made it clear that the struggle from the woman's side was of a greater moral and more important but in order for both sides to find their freedom they had to find equal ground and that one without the other would not be able to find peace I really like the idea of the intertwining Souls through the whole Space and Time Factor though in this case it would be gods. I think you did a really good job with the story even with the rough patches. I can't wait to see what you do from here and hope that you keep on writing.

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Is this it

So far so good really well this latest one was the best not that the others weren't great to I think you could take it even a step further I'm really hoping that you will continue the series and maybe add a few more twists and turns but I'll leave that up to you thanks for the great read. Keep up the fantastic work

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Keep going

As I said in the first book keep it up and keep going I'm really enjoying your work and really looking forward to the next one I've always enjoyed writing and reading especially when it comes to fantasy books this hybrid series has really turned my tail. It is giving me so many ideas of my own 4 Twist and Turn of my own or things that I might try in the near future I might even toss in a few things for some stories I'm working on now I can't wait to see what you come up with next

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More

I read this one and I'm hooked I have already put the other to come after it in my library I am looking forward to seeing how this story turns out and where the other two come into play. I can't wait to read the other two when I am finished with this one.

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Were

I really like this one and the ones that were here before it I want to read the rest that come after it I'm waiting patiently for those to be completed as I know that they are on hold or are in process I can't wait to see what comes from them and I am hoping that they will be just as exciting as the ones that I have already read

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Going foward

I will be going forward with the series and continuing to read the next to that I found I really enjoyed reading this one and can't wait to read the next two I really like reading this with him the fact of what it stood for the idealism of femininity the fact that women can stand on their own and don't need a man for everything and that even though when we do need a man we can still stand strong even if we are broken

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Want to finish reading this book and the others you have on this app so please post when you can. Cant wait to see whats next.

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Please add more to the story or a sequel. I greatly enjoyed this story and would like to know more going forward. Having the story end here would be disappointing.

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Disappointed

I am disappointed that I could not read the entire book chapter by chapter I am seeing this a lot on inkitt and other apps or website I find it to be a bit annoying that I cannot read books to their full extent this is something for me that would make it slightly irritating for me I do not like starting a book that I cannot finish and I do not like having to bounce around from one place to the next in order just to finish one thing recommendation that if you are going to start writing a book that you should finish writing the entire thing in one place. Not just started and then leave it

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Loving it

This book was a wonderful read I was so into it that I just could not stop and I can't we ait to start book 2. Every time I that that it could not get more surprising or more out there I ended up being surprised anyways I really liked the female character she always seem to be able to let you know her mind even when she was scared or frightened she also showed strength to a magnitude that would shock a normal person even with her deep Darkness and her uncertainty that followed her she found the power to stand tall I can't wait to see what she will do next.

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Anticipating

Reading book two and between the two books I just can't get enough. I want more and I hope that more will come please continue the series.

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Sad

I was really beginning to love the story and I sort of still do but we're really made me sad with how mean they got over 1 ridiculous thing how could they ever think that she would do something that way and even if she did how could they get so cruel and mean I can't believe that anyone who would truly love someone would be like that to be honest I am not surprised that she pushed away from them and began to hate them I do hope though that in the end that they will understand and she will forgive them because it would be really sad and really heartbreaking if they didn't find a way to work their way through the truth from the lies but they need to understand the wrong they committed and they need to understand and no matter when someone does something wrong it is not okay to use physical Force

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Beast

Were does beast story go from here.

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We're a my devil.

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Loved

Already Conway to reading the next part I really like the vampire he is so my kinda guy.dream.

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