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the best

"All I can say write now is that u've got good writing skills and iI love all ur stories they are the best "

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Liebe

"Sehr schöner Roman. Gut geschrieben, es macht Spaß ihn zulesen . Bin gespannt wie er ausgeht und vor allem für wem entscheidet sie sich. "

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😃 well well well

"Well, dayyyuuuummmmmm, I was expecting more chapters when I hit the "rate the story" wall. It was a great story, though...it was a different and intriguing love story."

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Love this underdog story of a young woman who

"This is a really good story again I highly recommend reading this story to underdog woman from a poor background going through so many difficulties in our life trying to turn things around and all the tribulations she goes through meeting someone rich"

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Lost then found

"Beautifully written short story of finding what works for them. "

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The Proposal

"An amazing romance novelette written by kuhle, about a troubled young woman named Nia. Kulhe tells of Nia’s struggle to survive in this world. Follow her journey from despair to ultimate peace and love. This story is a short erotic/ romance novelette, that I recommend. So find a comfy chair, a warm blanket, a nice cup of tea and jump into Nia’s world. 💐"

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ASDGHJKL AWESOME! JUST AWESOME!

"Alright, so! How should I start? Maybe by screaming that I ENJOYED THIS BOOK SO, SO, SO MUCH!! REALLY. I’m not exaggerating. Right from the start, Kuhle hooks us into the story. Imagine reading a prologue about a girl who’s about to commit suicide but is saved by a knight in shining armor—it’s already such an intriguing plot. And the further you read, the more interesting it gets! The romance interests are both swoon-worthy (and drop-dead gorgeous), and I know any sane girl would be torn trying to choose between them. One is the workaholic, mysterious, polite, and successful billionaire. The other is his brother—aloof, charming, charismatic, and sweet-talking. I mean, love triangles are complicated enough, but falling in love with two siblings? Well, well, the drama is bound to be intense. The plot is already incredibly attention-grabbing, but let me talk about the writing—guys, THE WRITING!!! If you’re familiar with NA books, especially college romances, this narrative fits right in. It’s neat, with almost no grammar mistakes (just one or two related to characters’ names), and it’s deep. The characters feel so real! It’s funny because earlier today, I tried reading a published book, but I gave up after two pages because the characters felt flat and boring. And yet, here on Inkitt, this story has characters that feel alive—you get to know them and care about them (because I definitely do—I care about Nia ♡). This book deserves to be on Kindle Unlimited, seriously. To all the contemporary romance lovers out there, you HAVE to give this book a try. It’s honestly as good as a published book—a rare gem on Inkitt. If you’ve read Katie McGarry’s books or Colleen Hoover’s Hopeless, the narrative is on that level, in my opinion. I’m so glad I stumbled upon this. Tips for the author: You’re an amazing writer. Next time, consider posting chapters bit by bit instead of marking the book complete all at once. That way, it’ll gain a steady reader base, and your incredible story will get the exposure it deserves. When marked as complete, books don’t have as many chances to appear on the front page, which reduces their visibility. This is an amazing story, and it deserves more readers and comments—seriously! Well done! ♡"

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"I am absolutely hooked up. You have done an amazing job so far! "

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So emotional

"You're good at capturing emotions. I can feel Nia's pain and anger through the way you write. I really like your book and I'll be adding it to my list. Try to edit your work more carefully. There were subtle mistakes here and there. And try to space out the sentences so it won't look bulky to read. Other than that, an amazing read. "

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Great plot

"The writing style is good and the dialogues are well written. Efficiently conveying the emotions of the characters, the story is very intriguing. Looking to read more "

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