What is your opinion?
A True Love Story in the Making
"This is a love story that is so good to read. I got hooked after the first chapter and dare not stop until I got to the end. The author has outdone herself and I hope she publishes this masterpiece. I want more seductive plots and a lot more drama in the future. May Ms. White write more stories like this in future. Kudos all the way"
Fantastic story
"OK so I've read this story before through Deviant Art and on Fiction press. I've seen it grow, change and get better with editing (although it still needs more work) I got to admit this is still one of my favorite LGBTQ stories I've gotten to read in the last 10 years. I met the author back in 2009 in Ottawa Ontario and I have to admit she's quite the character. You need to learn who she is in order to get why she writes like she does. She's truly a breath of fresh air, with a touch of glitter. (She gets into everything and you just can't forget her LOL) I recommend this story to ANYONE who is struggling with coming out. To those who need a bit of romance in their life. For those who like the drama and for those who just enjoy a story with a wonderful plot line where it's not all about the smut. It has a story line that's easy to follow and it's well thought out. I can let others know now. If you want to read more of her series, look her up on Fiction Press or google Steppin' Out. You'll find the rest of her books which are done up to book four and most of book 5 and just as well written as this one (yes, grammar errors and all LOL) Aj... keep it up girl You'll go far! <3 Michie"
Trio
"I didn't read the entire story. . I read up to Chapter 5. Therefore I am not sure what the actual plot is. The story jumps right in to an event without information on venue or characters. It felt disjointed. I felt like I got to know a little bit about the characters in bits and pieces. The story moves too fast with the characters falling in love in such a short time (which I knows happens but it didn't meld with this story). There is a lot of dialogue and very little description to put the reader visually in the story. I do think the story has a lot of potential, but it does need a lot of work. There were several grammar errors in the first four chapters (your instead of you're for example), as well as punctuation and capitalization (polo should be Polo). The chapters I read remind me of a book I attempted to write. . . very heavy on dialogue and not enough on scene setting or character building. As I stated there is a lot of potential."
