1 chapitres lus

26 oct. 2024

Wonderful Work!!!

"A brilliant work!!! A Halloween scare story!!! The plot is wonderfully delivered, where we delve into the world of Luna. The imagery in the plot is well delivered as well, giving us a picture into her Quaint neighborhood. Carnivals should be fun, but this one bears an air of mystery. I love the story, author and the writing style, is flawless. Beautiful work, Carol. Can't wait to reach the end...😱😱🥶😱🔥🥶❤️"

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Jiceryl

4 chapitres lus

27 oct. 2024

Thumbs Up!

"I've read through the first posted chapters, and here are my thoughts on the book. I like the concept, and the author did a great job of capturing my attention, especially with the gripping first chapter. It was well-written, and the plot was compelling enough to keep me reading until the last chapter that was posted by the author. I also like the narrator, or main character; she has a very inquisitive and authentic nature. However, I struggled to picture the character Marcus. I hope his character, along with other important elements like the setting and the backstory about the creepy events, will be developed as the story progresses. Also, I also feel uncomfortable with the pacing Anyway, thumbs up for the intriguing plot! I'll definitely keep this in my library to see how the story unfolds. I may even write another review once the author completed the book and I'm done reading it "

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