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The Carnival Eternal By Carol Knox.

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Résumé

In the quiet town of Harmony Creek, sixteen-year-old Luna Blackwood sees things others don't. Haunted by the disappearance of her father eleven years ago at a mysterious carnival, Luna uses her camera to capture the strange and unsettling occurrences that plague her town. When the carnival returns, drawn by an unknown force, Luna must confront her fears and venture into its heart to uncover the truth about its origins and her father's fate. Armed with her camera and aided by her friend Marcus, Luna must navigate the carnival's twisted reality, decipher its cryptic messages, and face the darkness that lurks within. But as she delves deeper into the carnival's mysteries, she discovers that the truth is far more terrifying than she could have ever imagined.

Genre :
Horror,Thriller
Auteur :
CarolK
Statut :
Terminé
Chapitres :
10
Rating
4.0 (2 avis)
Classification par âge :
16+

Part I: The Awakening. Chapter 1: The Quiet Before...

Through my vintage Nikon D750′s viewfinder, Harmony Creek shimmered with an unsettling beauty. It was October, the air thick with the scent of burnt caramel and decaying leaves, a peculiar sweetness that always clung to the town this time of year. Pumpkins lined the porches of Victorian houses, their carved grins seeming to leer in the twilight. A strand of fake cobwebs, strung across Mrs. Gable’s rose bushes, swayed in the breeze, catching the fading light and casting long, distorted shadows. Everything looked picture-perfect, the kind of idyllic small-town scene that belonged on a postcard. But through my lens, a different reality bled through.

The LCD screen flickered with digital artifacts, strange patterns that shouldn’t exist in a digital image. I frowned, adjusting the focus ring. Was it the fading light playing tricks on the sensor? I zoomed in on a cluster of jack-o’-lanterns lining the sidewalk. On the screen, the mist swirling around them twisted into impossible spirals, their carved grins morphing into grotesque sneers. Dark spots, like voids in the fabric of reality, appeared where there should be light, and luminous streaks, like tears in the mundane, cut through solid objects.

“Why can I see this? Why me?” I muttered, the familiar frustration tightening my chest. Ever since I was a kid, my camera had been more than just a tool for capturing images. It was a window into a hidden world, a layer of reality that existed just beneath the surface. A flicker of movement in the shadows, a fleeting expression of malice on a seemingly friendly face, a whisper of an alternate dimension – my lens captured it all. Dad called it a gift, but sometimes it felt more like a curse.

“Luna Blackwood, professional weird-hunter,” I said with a wry smile, adjusting the aperture to compensate for the strange light distortions. My #HarmonyCreekWeird Instagram collection had started as a joke freshman year – a way to document the quirky and unusual happenings in our sleepy town. A tilted tombstone in the old cemetery that seemed to change angles between shots. A stray cat whose eyes reflected impossible colours, shifting like oil slicks in the moonlight. The strange electromagnetic readings from the abandoned mine shaft on the outskirts of town, readings that made my compass spin like a top. But lately... lately, the photos were showing something more sinister, something that sent shivers down my spine.

The screen on my camera flickered again, and for a moment, the image stabilized. I gasped, my hand flying to my mouth. In the background of an otherwise normal street scene, a familiar figure stood watching from beneath the awning of the antique shop. The worn leather jacket, the way he held his camera – just like mine – it couldn’t be. But there he was, Dad, as clear as the day he disappeared, though the timestamp in the corner of the screen showed this was taken just hours ago.

My phone buzzed, breaking my concentration. Katie’s latest Instagram story showed the same street, bathed in warm autumn light, filtered to perfection. A typical, carefree Halloween in Harmony Creek. No flickering shadows, no distorted figures, no Dad. The contrast between her picture and mine made my heart pound in my chest.

“You coming to the carnival opening?” her text read. “It’s gonna be epic! 🎡✨"

The word ‘carnival’ sent a jolt of anxiety through me. Mom’s note on the fridge flashed through my mind: “Double shift at the hospital. Dinner in the microwave. Love you.” Same schedule as always since Dad disappeared eleven years ago, swallowed by the night during a carnival just like this one. Not the regular county fair with its Ferris wheel and funnel cakes – this had been something different. Something that had appeared overnight, shrouded in mist and whispers, drawing people in with its hypnotic lights and ethereal music.

My camera’s display glitched again, the image breaking apart into pixels before reforming. In the corrupted frame, I could make out a spiral pattern, faint but unmistakable, etched into the brick wall behind Dad’s ghostly figure. The same pattern that had appeared in his last photos, the ones the police had dismissed as equipment malfunction or artistic experimentation.

The silence outside was more than just quiet; it was an oppressive void, a suffocating absence of sound. No crickets chirped. No distant traffic hummed. No night birds called. The world seemed to be holding its breath, waiting, watching. A wave of nausea washed over me, and I had to grip the windowsill to steady myself.

My phone lit up with notifications:

Marcus: “Library archives showing something weird. Old carnival photos, same patterns. Call me.”

Local News Alert: “Unusual atmospheric phenomena reported. Citizens advised to stay indoors.”

System Warning: “Storage corrupted. Backup failed.”

Katie’s Instagram Live: “OMG guys, check out these amazing lights!”

Through my viewfinder, I watched as more strange distortions crept into the frame. The streetlights bent at impossible angles, their glow stretching like taffy. The shadows danced against the wind, writhing like living creatures. And in every photo, that spiral pattern grew stronger, like a signature written in light, a warning scrawled across the fabric of reality.

The memory card warning flashed: “Card Error.” But when I reviewed the saved images, they showed something my eyes couldn’t see – a truth hidden in plain sight, a world teetering on the edge of chaos. This wasn’t just about strange photos anymore. Something was coming to Harmony Creek, something that had taken Dad, something that left its mark in every digital image I captured.

And somehow, I knew, it was coming for me next.

Image created with the assistance of Bing Image Creator.

Dites à CarolK ce que vous avez pensé de ce chapitre !

CarolK
CarolK

Thanks so much.

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Jiceryl
Jiceryl

wow! gripping chapter 😳

2 ans
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Abeer
Abeer

Great start✨

2 ans
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