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Summary

Heather Dlomo is a Black Air Raider, a sub-species of the Intaka people, a winged people with a natural proclivity for violence. She's worked faithfully for her Warcheif and Queen under the special divisions for longer than she can remember. She's never set a foot out of line and has done everything for her gods and her people. But even she has ambitions. And secret news of a delivery of tribute from one foreign nation to another is just too good to ignore. Fury Windrake was one of the best soldiers and commanders of her race, the proud Inqindi. Were it not for her colour; grey fur on mixed skin instead of either black fur on pale skin or white fur on dark skin. Her and her men, having left a people who abandoned them for a 'mistake of birth' travel the Black Thorne doing any work they can; because the cost of freedom is pretty damn high and it's warm glow only lasts so long before the cold sets in and you die. Both women met while killing a king; each doing their part in the mission for their people. Now friends for life, they plan to meet up in Emadlageni with their teams for a score that will change their fates forever. But there's an old Black Air Raider expression, 'if you want to make the gods laugh, tell the Goddess, Modimo Hleko, your plans' First of multiple, Black Thorne, Black Air Raider, Fury and Heather tales to come.

Status
Complete
Chapters
30
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Elite

Every race has rights, the right to live, the right to govern, the right to their culture, the right to believe in their gods and the rights to their own traditions. But most important, the right to defend themselves. With that right comes the right to possess their own forces, of those forces, divisions are set where the most powerful, intelligent, quick, brave and determined are set apart from the rest, and these proud few possess the honour of being….


THE ELITE



Glossary

[1] The last month of the year. There are 22 Months in a year. And the new month is represented by a moonless night.

[2] Jale – Jale is a special plant which grows in the most southern point of Enduku. In is alcoholic form besides being intoxicated it can produce feelings of euphoria, make people more confident, but can also forget.

[3] Black Air Raider courting rituals consist of a woman approaching a man and punching him directly in the face and attempting to beat them until submission, if it was too easy, the men were weak, if it was too hard then the feelings weren’t mutual. There is an entire form to it, from where to best hit the person in the face and what are the best results a woman may be hoping for as a fight to a Black Air Raider is the ultimate for of interaction of intercourse even.

[4] Green for the fresh tree leaves forced to the ground. Considered a dishonour to some races.

[5] The Jingelor being a creature so attuned to the smell of blood that, with right instructions, it could sniff out a person’s lineage. There was no way of running from a Jingelor. But even the best beast couldn’t find any soul if it didn’t have a point of reference.

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a very interesting start, looking forward to reading more.

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