Intro
Hello,
For the new readers of my Story Falling for Braxton. This is a story I wrote a couple of years ago and found a very emotional raw story which I had a great feeling about. Now I started back to read the first chapter and had my thoughts with it, it didn't come over like a great starting of the journey I would take you with.
Also, I tested out writing the thoughts of Braxton in a glimpse into the story with the curved lettering. I liked it and never had feedback on it, so if you do like it let me know.
So back to the point why I am again posting this story. I am trying to write it so you see what I mean and where the characters go. The development is more into the chapters. And so I can see which story you prefer the most.
There are some adjustments so it's not completely the same. You can share if you like it like this the most or keep it to the old one.
It's like an experiment. I am trying to keep on improving myself because as you have seen English is not my first language. And even in my language, you have to find a way to write, so your readers understand the story and start to fall in love with it.
Enough writing about what I did, keep reading in the next chapter and you will see.
Just one last thing,
I broke the first chapter up so it's not too long. The chapter before was shorter and had not this much information so you will see there is going to be more in the next chapter which was before in the first.
Thank you for your help and I hope you enjoy it!
