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THE SMILING MAN

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Summary

The Smiling Man Mirror Game is a chilling urban legend that dares participants to summon a sinister entity in the dead of night. To play, you stand in front of a mirror while holding a candle preferably at 3:00 AM, known as the “witching hour.” You light a single candle and stare into your reflection without blinking for several minutes while asking, “Who is watching me.” And if you see his grin, he will come for you. That’s what happened to Seth and his friends on Halloween…

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

THE SMILING MAN

The night started innocently enough. It was Halloween, and my friends were over at my house—nothing unusual for a Friday in our small, dead-end town. The streets outside were quiet now, most of the younger kids already tucked in for the night, their candy bags emptied. The only sounds were the occasional burst of laughter from teenagers wandering the neighborhood and the whisper of dead leaves scraping along the pavement.


We were sitting in the living room, sprawled out on the couch and chairs, debating what to do next. Kim sat cross-legged on the floor, idly twirling a piece of her dark hair. Tyler leaned back in the recliner, his ever-present smirk plastered on his face, while Emma and Jake sat together on the couch, their voices hushed as they shared some private joke.


“Let’s do something spooky,” Tyler said suddenly, breaking the comfortable silence. “It’s Halloween, after all.”


Emma rolled her eyes. “What, like a séance? Please.”


“No,” Kim said, her voice low. “Not a séance.” Her eyes flicked toward me, and I noticed the slight tremor in her hand. “What about… the mirror game?”


My stomach sank. I should’ve said something right then and there—should’ve shut the idea down before it had a chance to take root. But I didn’t.


Kim explained the rules as we gathered in the dimly lit dining room. It wasn’t complicated. All you needed was a mirror, a candle, and a question. You were supposed to stand in front of the mirror with the candle lit and ask the question: “Who is watching me?”


“It’s just a stupid game,” Tyler scoffed, though I could tell by the way he avoided looking at the mirror that he wasn’t as confident as he pretended to be.


“It’s not stupid,” Kim said sharply. “You’re supposed to see their reflection in the mirror—the one who’s watching you. But if you see someone smiling… it means you’re cursed.”


“Cursed?” Emma repeated, her voice barely above a whisper.


“Yeah,” Kim said. “They say if you see a smile, the Smiling Man will come for you.”


A chill ran down my spine at the name. I had heard the stories before, whispered on the playground and passed around campfires. The Smiling Man. A figure dressed in black, with a top hat and a grin that stretched too wide. A being who appeared in mirrors, shadows, and dreams, feeding on fear and despair.


“I don’t believe in that crap,” Tyler said, though his voice faltered slightly.


“Then prove it,” Kim challenged, thrusting the candle toward him.


Tyler hesitated, then snatched the candle from her hand. “Fine. Watch and learn, losers.”


Tyler stood in front of the mirror, his face illuminated by the flickering candlelight. The rest of us huddled behind him, the air thick with nervous tension.


“Who is watching me?” he asked, his voice dripping with mockery.


For a moment, nothing happened. The mirror reflected only Tyler’s face and the dim glow of the candle. Then, the flame flickered, and the room seemed to grow colder.


“See?” Tyler said, smirking. “It’s—”


He froze mid-sentence, his smirk vanishing as his eyes locked onto the mirror.


“What is it?” Emma whispered, clutching Jake’s arm.


Tyler didn’t answer. He was staring at the glass, his face pale. Slowly, he raised his hand to touch his reflection.


That’s when I saw it.


The reflection in the mirror was smiling. Not Tyler’s usual cocky grin, but a grotesque, impossibly wide smile that didn’t belong to him. The teeth were jagged and yellow, the eyes black voids that seemed to swallow the light.


Tyler stumbled back, knocking the candle over. The flame sputtered out, plunging the room into darkness.


“Light the candle!” Emma screamed, fumbling for her phone.


I grabbed my flashlight, my hands shaking so badly it took me three tries to switch it on. The beam cut through the darkness, illuminating the mirror. The reflection was gone—just an ordinary pane of glass now.


“What the hell was that?” Tyler demanded, his voice shaking.


“I told you,” Kim said, her eyes wide. “You saw him, didn’t you?”


Tyler didn’t answer, but the look on his face said it all.


“We need to stop,” I said, stepping away from the mirror. “This isn’t funny anymore.”


“It wasn’t funny to begin with,” Kim snapped.


A loud creak interrupted us, the sound coming from somewhere deep within the house. We all froze, our ears straining to pinpoint the noise.


“Seth,” Kim whispered. “Did you lock the back door?”


I felt my stomach drop. “I think so…”


Another creak, closer this time.


“Someone’s in the house,” Jake said, his voice barely audible.


That’s when we heard it.


The laugh.


It was soft at first, barely more than a whisper, but it grew louder, filling the room with a deep, rasping sound that sent chills down my spine.


And then we saw him.


Standing in the doorway, silhouetted by the faint glow of the hallway light, was the Smiling Man. The figure remained still, a dark silhouette against the light. Then, he tipped his hat in our direction with a unnatural wide grin on its face.


He was taller than I imagined, his frame impossibly thin, his face obscured by shadows. But his grin was unmistakable, the jagged teeth glinting in the darkness.


Tyler was the first to break. He bolted for the front door, shoving past me in his desperation to escape.


“Wait!” I shouted, but it was too late.


The Smiling Man’s grin widened, and he raised one hand, his long, spindly fingers snapping with a sickening crack. Tyler froze mid-step, his body jerking unnaturally before crumpling to the floor.


“Tyler!” Emma screamed, rushing toward him.


Jake grabbed her arm, pulling her back. “Don’t! He’s—he’s gone.”


The Smiling Man tilted his head, his eyes locking onto me.


“Run,” Kim whispered, her voice trembling. “We have to run.”


And so we did.


The house had changed. Hallways that should have led to the front door twisted impossibly, looping back on themselves or ending in solid walls. Rooms stretched and shifted, the furniture warped into grotesque shapes.


“This isn’t real,” I muttered, clutching Kim’s hand as we stumbled through the shifting maze. “It can’t be real.”


But the Smiling Man was always there, his laughter echoing from every corner.


We lost Jake next. One moment he was with us, and the next he was gone, his screams fading into the distance. Emma was hysterical, tears streaming down her face as she clung to me.


“We’re all going to die,” she sobbed.


“Not if we keep moving,” Kim said, her voice hard despite the fear in her eyes. “We have to keep moving.”


We ran. And ran. And ran. The house seemed to stretch before us endlessly, as if the walls themselves were trying to keep us trapped inside. My heart pounded in my chest, each step heavy and labored. The sounds of our frantic footsteps echoed in the endless hallways, blending with the incessant, low laughter that reverberated from the darkness around us.


I could feel it now—the weight of the house itself pressing in on us, as though it were alive, watching, waiting for the inevitable.


Kim and Emma were close behind me. Emma’s breath was ragged, her sobs barely contained, but Kim—Kim was eerily calm, her eyes sharp, scanning the shadows, listening for the sounds of our pursuer.


“Where are we going?” Emma gasped.


“I don’t know,” I muttered, feeling my throat tighten with panic. “We just… have to get out.”


Kim shook her head, glancing at me. “It doesn’t matter. There’s no way out.”


“Shut up,” I snapped, though my words sounded hollow even to me. I didn’t want to believe it. I couldn’t believe it.


I turned another corner, hoping to find something—anything—that resembled the front door. But all I saw were more hallways, more rooms, each one looking identical to the last. Everything was warped, distorted. It felt like we were moving in circles, chasing our own shadows.


“He’s here,” Kim said suddenly, her voice cold.


I froze, every muscle tensing. From the corner of my eye, I saw him. The Smiling Man, standing in the middle of the hallway. His wide grin stretched unnaturally across his face, and his black eyes glistened like pits of ink. He didn’t move, not at first. He just stood there, watching us, as if he was enjoying the show.


“Run!” Kim shouted, her voice snapping me out of my paralysis.


We turned and sprinted in the opposite direction, our feet pounding the floor in time with the rhythm of our desperate breaths.


The Smiling Man didn’t chase us—not immediately. Instead, the house itself seemed to come alive, its walls closing in, its rooms shifting. I could feel the house growing smaller around us, suffocating us with its unnatural presence.


“Where the hell are we?” Emma gasped, her eyes darting around in panic. “It’s like we’re… trapped.”


I turned to Kim, trying to ignore the gnawing dread creeping at the edges of my thoughts. “Kim, what do we do? What the hell do we do?”


But Kim wasn’t looking at me. She was staring at the floor ahead, her eyes wide with horror.


“Look,” she whispered, pointing.


I followed her gaze and froze.


There, just ahead of us, was a mirror.


But it wasn’t just any mirror. It was massive—taller than a man, framed in twisted, dark wood, the edges jagged and sharp, as if it had been carved from bone.


And in the reflection, there were more than just our own faces.


I saw Tyler.


His mouth was open in a silent scream, his eyes wide with terror. He pressed his palms flat against the glass, but he didn’t seem to be able to move. He was trapped. His reflection was there, locked in place, a ghostly figure.


“Tyler!” Emma cried, her voice cracking. She reached out toward the mirror, but Kim grabbed her arm, holding her back.


“Don’t,” Kim said, her voice tight with fear.


I turned toward the mirror. My reflection… It was smiling. I could see it—my own face, twisted into that grotesque, unnatural grin. The teeth were sharp, too sharp, like they didn’t belong to me. I wanted to scream, but no sound came out.


I looked away quickly, shuddering. I didn’t want to believe it. I didn’t want to accept that it was happening. But everything in me screamed that it was.


“Let’s go,” Kim said urgently, tugging at my sleeve. “Now.”


We stumbled into another room—this one smaller, with a low ceiling. It was empty except for a single, old wooden chair in the middle of the room. The air in here was different—stale, heavy with the smell of something rotten.


“I… I don’t know if I can keep going,” Emma whispered, her voice barely audible.


I could see the exhaustion in her eyes, the hopelessness creeping into her every movement. But we had no choice. We had to keep moving.


Kim looked at me, her expression hardening. “We need to make a stand. We can’t keep running.”


“Make a stand?” I repeated, incredulous. “Against him?”


Kim nodded. “We don’t have a choice. If we die trying to escape, then it’s over. But if we fight, we might… might have a chance.”


I shook my head, the words catching in my throat. “What do we fight him with? There’s nothing here.”


But Kim wasn’t listening. She walked toward the chair, her footsteps slow but determined. “It’s always been the same,” she said softly. “You either fight or you die.”


She grabbed the chair and lifted it over her head. Without another word, she hurled it at the mirror.


The glass shattered with an earsplitting crash. For a moment, everything was still.


And then, everything changed.


The Smiling Man appeared in the doorway, his figure dark against the broken shards of the mirror. His grin was impossibly wide, stretching so far it seemed to take up his whole face. He stepped forward, his movements slow and deliberate.


I could feel the air grow thick, oppressive, as though something was squeezing the very life out of the room.


“Do you think that will stop me?” he rasped, his voice low and almost gentle. “You’ve seen it all, haven’t you? You know what’s coming.”


I wanted to run. I wanted to scream, to beg for mercy. But I couldn’t. My legs were rooted to the spot, my body frozen in place by the sheer weight of his presence.


Kim stepped forward, her hands shaking but still holding the broken shard of glass. “Get away from us,” she said, her voice firm despite the fear in her eyes.


The Smiling Man tilted his head, his grin widening. “It’s too late for that.”


I felt a hand on my shoulder and looked up to see Emma, her face pale, her eyes wide with terror. “Seth, we have to… we have to stop him… please.”


But it was too late. With a swift motion, the Smiling Man lunged. His jagged teeth sank into Kim’s neck.


“No!” I screamed, rushing forward, but before I could reach her, the room spun. The world twisted into darkness.


When I woke up, I was alone.


The house was silent. There were no creaks, no laughter. Just an unbearable stillness.


Kim was gone. Emma was gone.


And the Smiling Man? He was nowhere to be found.


But as I stood up, my reflection stared back at me from the broken shards of glass scattered across the floor. My smile was wide. Too wide.


And my teeth were sharp.


I don’t know how much time has passed since that night. The world outside is the same, but everything is different now. I can’t go back to my old life. Not after what I’ve seen.


Every mirror I pass, every window I look through, there’s the smile. It follows me. In my dreams, I hear his laugh, deep and terrible, echoing through my mind. Sometimes, I see Kim’s face, or Emma’s, twisted in a silent scream, trapped in the reflection with me.


And always, the smile. It’s mine now.


Every time I look in the mirror, I’m reminded that I never left.


Because once you meet the Smiling Man, you’re never truly free.


Every time I look in the mirror, I see it. The smile. My own reflection grins back at me, stretching impossibly wide, the jagged teeth gleaming in the dim light. I try to look away, but I can’t. It holds me. It pulls me in. The longer I stare at it, the more I lose myself in it. It feels like I’m fading. Like I’m becoming the reflection.


They’re still here. I can hear them sometimes—Emma’s sobs, Kim’s screams—distorted, muffled by the walls, but they’re there. Trapped, forever screaming in the dark, their faces pressed against the glass, their eyes wide with terror.


And the Smiling Man’s grin is all I can see. It’s burned into my mind, seared into the back of my skull, as if every memory is being rewritten to accommodate his presence. I can’t remember what it was like before him. I can’t remember when I wasn’t like this.


I sit here now, in this dark room, with only my thoughts and the echo of the Smiling Man’s laughter to keep me company. It doesn’t matter anymore. Nothing does.


I look into the mirror one last time, and I don’t see myself anymore. I see him. I see us. His grin is stretching wider than ever before, his sharp teeth gleaming in the low light. His eyes are black pits, infinite and empty.


And then I smile.


It’s the last thing I do.

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Ahhhh, that ending line tho! So perfect! I wish the story could have gone on a little longer but you landed the ending with that line and I respect that

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