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The alphas assistant

"Loved it, the characters, plot. GREAT jOB!!"

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The alpha's assistant

"Interesting world. Not many stories with the magical veil. Lost me a little at the end with who was who, but still a good story "

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Enjoyable, Easy to read

"I came across this book by accident as I was looking at recent reviews. And I’m glad I did stop to read the beginning as I have been hooked ever since. The story is there The use of characters is there I cannot wait to turn the page to read what happens next "

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Great Book!

"This was a great book. There were some transition issues that could have made better sense when changing from one conversation between people to another conversation between others. I thought he Aunt's name was Dennis then changed to Derrik or did I miss something? Otherwise great characters and plot."

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The alpha’s assistant

"Really great story with wonderful characters "

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Ahhh shifters

"This story is packed with all the supernaturals. This is my first story where the moon goddess was not center stage, heavy on oracles and enrichments. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading the sequel. "

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The Alpha’s Assistant

"An enjoyable if sometimes confusing story, lots and lots happening. "

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A beautiful story….

"A beautiful story of fated love, family, friendship, strong bonds, and loyalty. A woman with nothing but a wonderful heart to turn around and get all the love and family her heart deserved. Plus a fight that without her could be lost. The devotion from her new family and friends to her is truly amazing. enjoy your read. Jeordie never fails to deliver. An artist with a pen brings words to life and magically transports us to all of her stories making us feel as if we are there. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️"

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The Alpha’s Assistant

"Enjoyed it. Great job.👏 "

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The alphas assistant.

"Kaiden and Kathleen - both of them need their heads banging together but it’s great watching them play ‘tag’. Story is getting more tense now - great! "

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Love

"I love how romantic it is in all the little details they give."

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The alpha s associate

"Was a good read.The storyline was great.Just nee and to finish the book."

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Amazing

"Love this story"

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The Alphas assistant first watch

"Great read just want to keep reading ,love the characters, love this book "

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The Alfas Assistant

"So far so good. To me the story line is clear. All the characters story line is clear. So far not any intense violence. Not into that."

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Having the best time with this book!

"This book is so addictive. Please can I have some more!!"

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Review

"I love the direction the story is taking. I just hope Chloe does not run for the hills. So far I am enjoying this novel. "

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Love

"I can not wait for more chapters. I love the line about biting the ear off. 🥰🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟😍"

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Another great story

"This story grabbed me right from the very start. Very easy to read and very engaging. This is my favorite so far!!!"

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Jenny due

"Great reading,pitty the it's so so short "

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