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A kingdom of jewels and dragons

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Summary

The fantasy country of Eldoria watches as Eva , a sixteen year old girl from south east england , and Levi , a 17 year old boy from Eldoria , compete in a set of trials set by the king and queen . Eva has no interest in these trials and all she really wants is to go back home to her gray english life in a village tucked into the countryside . Levi is fully prepared and ready to prove himself in these trials and he always expected his companion would be just as ready as him . as the trials go on and become more and more dangerous will Eva and Levi find a common ground and manage to complete the trials or will their differing views lead to the exposure of their fatal flaws that become their undoing .

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

I step out of the front door , calling goodbye to my mum as I walked out .The sky is a mix of powder blue and dark grey and the sun barley peeks golden rays through the thick clouds , I pull my scarf higher up my neck and walk down the garden path . mist curls around the bottom of the gate that opens onto the pavement.

I lower one foot onto the ground followed by the other. As I turn to shut the gate a weird feeling , like falling fills my senses , my vision blurs and I reach for the gate to support me only for it to not be there . My brain starts screaming at me its like its saying '' GET A GRIP EVA '' I honestly don't have time for this . My vision fully fades out as the feeling of falling builds in my stomach , spilling out into my chest and making my limbs heavy .

It feels like in falling forever , like a rock dropped down an old well that's been run dry for centuries . My body becomes numb and tingly , like i have pins and needles . Then everything fades ; the feeling , the sounds of Tuesday morning traffic , the grey-blue sky , it all gives way to nothing .

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