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Great story

"Another great story Thank you so much Kelly "

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very good "Start"

"Liked the story very much. Your story can go in so many directions and I hope to see more someday. Till then I'll read others you have written. Good Work"

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Good read!

"I like the exploration of sexual fantasies being understood deeper My friends It deserves a great rating "

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Lesbian Teacher

"The students seeing the submissive traits of the teacher was observant on their part. I interrupted the pictures as more of a humiliation than blackmail. Throughly enjoyed by a fellow submissive."

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Excellent

"Well written, plot is well described and goes at a good pace. Characters are described as perfect."

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Erotic

"Erotic but intense"

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Teacher

"Really well written very horney story every woman should read and relive try and love"

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Excellent

"Excellent story and am enjoying thoroughly "

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A story to remember

"Really great perspective on a situation (real or fiction, who can tell?) that draws you deeper with every chapter. The next chapter is obvious, again .. but so captivating. Loved it. I def love the ideas, your stories and way of how you think. Keep it up, Kelly! ❤️"

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Great spicy read

"Sometimes there’s repeated phrases that seem stilted and delay unnecessarily. Good writing and grammar. Good psychology of the main character. Juicy all round! "

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Great!

"A wee bit unrealistic of course and convenient too, especially in the classroom scenes, but great nonetheless ^^"

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The only way to overcome her aggressors, was submitting to them

"The author, Kelly "The Sub", is guiding us through the beginning of a teachers' (Kelly Smith) most turbulent days, once three students of her, find pictures online of her glory days as a semi naked party girl. Like a deer in headlights, her characters tries to analyze, to overcome the issue at hand, only to fail at the overwhelming sense of shame washing over her and the dominant aura of one of her students. It feels almost too easy, in the way the plot against her succeeds. However over the next days, maybe weeks, we partake in the deliberate deconstruction, of this teacher self-image. Authority, confidence and pride take a backseat to something more primal. Lust, shame and a craving for humiliation create the main characters' inner turmoil; one which is about to burst, like a damn after an apocalypse. The sensuous and eloquent depiction of "Kelly's torment" only fuels our, the readers, desire for more. With a few technical mistakes, 2 scenes repeating in different variation, the story is almost the perfect good-night lecture for any submissives' heart. Blackmail, humiliation, devotion: A tree of a submissives physical and psychological journey culminates in the last scene of this story in an almost spiritual way, which surely many wish, they could experience themselves once in their life. And now thanks to Kelly, you might be able to put that very wish into words. "

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