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Fantastic story

"It is a pleasure reading this story because the writer paints vivid pictures in my mind with the writing. Although I don't usually read these types of books, I am glad I gave this one a chance because it is quite an intriguing detective story written in a script format. The plot is an intriguing one that pulls you in, and you want to read more to find out what happens next. As for the writing style, it is quite amazing, fitting the chosen genre very well. There were a few repeated spelling errors that pulled me a bit out of the story for a moment, but that didn't take away from my enjoyment of the storyline. All in all, a very enjoyable, immersive detective story that has you constantly on the edge of your seat. I can imagine this story being turned into a really cool movie."

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Characters are likable

"I'm actually the author of this novel. I've done a lot of editing to this novel since I originally posted it to make it easier to understand and read more smoothly. Even though I've had to reread it a lot I still find myself getting pulled into the story each time. I would love to see the movie. And of course like all of us I too would love to hear from my readers. You are important to me."

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