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Ce roman c'est une perle

"Wow! Que dire sinon que c'est une histoire,histoire magique remplie d'amour, d'humour, de pleure, de rire mais quel beau cheminement pour ces deux tourtereaux. Merci à l'auteure, quelle belle écriture digne d'une grande romancière. J'ai adoré du début à la fin. "

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♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

"Sweet and romantic♥️"

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Good work

"Nice work.l love the female and male characters and also your writing style"

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Beautiful 😍

"Disfrute mucho de esta historia. Está llena de momentos de amor, de dificultades a vencer y de algunos momentos graciosos. Me gusta el modo en que el autor escribe. Felicidades! Sorry that the review is in Spanish, but know that I like the history.😅☺️"

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So amazing

"I loved this story. I was amazing and original. I loved it from the start. Thankyou"

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Does Every Love Deserve A 2nd Chance?

"This review is part of a "Review Swap", so I read the first ten chapters of the story to form a well-founded opinion. First of all, I’d like to mention that I usually read fantasy, crime, and horror stories. So believe me when I say that "Until You're Mine" is truly a fantastic story! If you’re new to Penn Queens page, I’d recommend checking out all the existing books first, as "Until You're Mine" is the sequel to "From Odd To Smitten". You don’t necessarily have to read the first part to understand the second one, as the author provides short recaps where needed. This helps explain the protagonist's decisions and thought process. I also really enjoyed the writing style. Personally, I love stories written in the first-person perspective, and the plot flows nicely—without dragging on unnecessarily or making sudden time jumps where a whole month is skipped... you know what I mean. There were only a few minor errors in the text, which I assume were just small oversights. I already mentioned them in the comments, so the author can take another look and fix them. However, they’re not a big deal—just a small step towards perfection, which this book truly deserves. Cheers!"

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Until you are mine

"This was an amazing read, l love both book one and two. Thanks for a wonderful read ❤️❤️❤️"

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PERFECT sweet treat♥️

"OKY THE MAN IS AMAZON RAINFOREST FR😭💖I loved the every sec of this book. How genuine the emotions were ,humour and commitment respect everything was 💯so on point. "

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One of the Best

"So far from what I have read, this book is one of the best on this platform. It's making me laugh and the characters are so involved and relatable. The scenes are alive and spicy 🔥. How it was written too deserves applause. I loooovvvvveeeee it"

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A sweet love story

"I have enjoyed a bit of this story. It's funny, so romantically sweet and steamy. Miguel is out of this world. Honestly, I want a man like him. So, so romantic. It makes sense he's Spanish. This story is an A++++"

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A good Sequel

"I'm enjoying it so far. It's funny and romantic. I think the second genre should be Humor and if a third can be added, erotica."

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Great Read

"The characters are funny and whimsical. I like how romantic and protective Miguel is. Since you've said in the comments you'll get to the part he explains why he stayed away for so long, I'll wait. But hurry and update. Amazing story 🥰😍"

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Thanks for the Sequel

"Hello Penn, I'm glad you didn't leave your first story on a cliff-hanger. This book is just great. I like how they Ellie and Miguel turned out. The push-and-pull between them is just hot. I can't wait to see how it goes for them."

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Amazing Story

"Queens doesn't disappoint. I like all the stories on her page. A pro. Keep it up and please update soon. I know you do well on that score"

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Loved it

"Love this novel, a refreshing change from the usual. Like the author's writing style."

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Until You're Mine

"Very compelling storyline. I liked the strong and intelligent main female character and the charming main male character. I liked the way he broke through her defences. An overall exciting read."

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His forever

"So exciting"

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Until your mine

"I like the story "

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Looking forward to getting to know these guys

"Where was Miguel? I mean ten years?! He clearly knows that Rivan is gay. Interesting twist there. Infuriating that the cousin didn’t tell the police the whole truth."

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Mr Bossy

"So far loving the story "

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